Your P doesnt flow at all really, make sure to check your proportions, at this point i wouldnt color anything...anyone can color like that not everyone can have great letter formation. Work on drawing basic letters you dont need to attack your name yet, I would say write out the alphabet in lower case, capital, and cursive. pick the letters you like and work with these for now, just do basic shapes and use block formation (draw squares, and rectangles in your letters to get better proportion). As you progress start tackling the letters you are not comfortable with and you will find you really like some of them.