I think that works a lot better. I am digging the first S on the first one, the second H on the second one, and the U on the last one. I think if you combine those into one you will have something solid going on. Well done. Work on consistency if you like it and tweek as needed. Or if you made the U from the first one you posted with the * and vanishing H's in two strokes (the left portion and right portion seperate. it looks like you did it in one starting with the left then up and back down for the right) I think that would clean it up and give you a good looking U.

 

wow this came out mad toy

 

Shush its lookin better but make the letters the same size and either level with eachother or at a consistent slant.
Phat I dig that shit. H looks too close to the p tohugh.

 

Crits? Never got any last time but "Looks better"

 

dont go so long with the N and the Y looks like a U make it bigger and make it flow more with the other letters
S not really feeling it

 

why the fuck should I change it if I like it?
I've been using it for a while now, yes, and until I get bored with it, I'm gonna keep using it... it's easy, fast, flowy, classy, nice and effective at the same time.
it might suck balls in this flick right there because it's a train and the surface is rounded as opposed to flat. I don't know if you've sprayed on such surfaces before, but it's not the easiest task too get an even and clean result

 

lol dont get mad nig ga
and yes yes i have i just dont have that much trouble with it

 

just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too

 

@gim..... i like the 2nd one the best and if you dont like waiting just go to walmart and get a sharpie MAGNUM... you dont have to be 18 and i got 2 for like 4$ great my still aint dead nd ive had mine for like 8 months

 

yeah word ima cop some of those i heard they smell like shit though

 

they smell... but you are not obligated to sit there and sniff it.

 

I still do.

 

i like everything except the and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

 

i like everything except the E and the lines under it id stay away from that for now. id say trying going for a normal lower case e <---like that one maybe even reverse it? who knows fuck with it
just my opinion though

 

shorten your letters, they are too tall and skinny imo

 

thanks for the info y'all probably gonna post a pic once i get my pilot

 

can i get some critiques on my hand style?

 

SMOKE try that first ge that down then try putting flavor into it

crts

 

snoke, dont extend your e and work on the curves of your s.