Something a little different I've been workin' on. This falls into my 'European' influenced style I'm pushing toward. If I can get all the loops the same width and height I think it will have some nice flow. The 'T' needs some work to fit in.
I like the potential that has rewt ... the t seems like it going to be hard to get the same flow as the other letters. really can't give crits on anything else because I know nothing of euro style.
Thanks, man. Any input is good input. I'm thinking about swirling that loop of the T all the way around back into the inside of the T. It'll be tacky but that's kind of that Euro feel.
View attachment 574786 been a while. Rewt:the W, move the ball line lower and the arm lines lower ( if that makes any sense lol) Kern: maybe make the e larger Rekt: maybe make the top of the e larger.
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I've since fixed the letter size issue, these are old but all I got and I know the shading is shit too haha. Crits on style and execution would be appreciated though
posek- your letters seem to get larger from beginning to end work on proportion ashis- lose the fish hooks things on the h and the 3d is off doesn't need shadowing at the top of the h note- top one has best potential the t needs work and lose the shines and add ons for now just work on structure. sine- resize your image .. but the n looks kind of like a k the i looks like a c and don't extend the bottom bar of the e out like that ..so work on your i and n.
Sine- I thought your N was a K that sort of looked like an H. Maybe try not making the top right section so large. Note-top one is the best, and your T's are hurting the worst. as far as the execution with the paint, make sure to cut back with fill colors if your outline drips messin around with a capital E ... View attachment 574989
hes doin it right. h1p, thanks, thats just what i was thinkin, the t is throwin me off just because of the style of the whole throwie. I'm thinkin name change cuz after i started writin this i realized how much i fucking hate t's and n's lol but i'll keep workin on this for now cuz all practice is good practice. as for crits, h1p pretty much hit everyone's nail on the head right thurr
try rounding the top of the p so it doesn't look quite so much like the e plus it'll flow with the dot of the i and make the whole piece more symmetrical im diggin it as a whole though that h is dope
the outermost outline was done with a different can and a different cap, so the fill wasn't the problem there, just amateur can control mixed with shitty paint lol and yeah ive been tryin to fix that t for a while ill post a flik when i get somethin that works thanks for the help