A quickie

MONE

 

ight thanks ill keep working on it

 

mone that M is kinda iffy lol. but i really like your N

 

yea ^
the m is av...n is nice...and if your going to do a connection like the 'N'>'E' one either do it for all the letters or none at all...(with some exceptions of course)

 

Lol yeah I need to work on this rounded M... But thanks my man

 

any crits?

 

lose the arrow.

 

started this 1, then came back to it and did the c-h, turned out lookin like shit

 

reach_ im just going to say the one most obvious and important thing. the C needs to fill out the space to its left a little better, not such a gap from the a

 

^ o yup all the letters are close to each other then the c spaces the h away from the rest
its ballpoint pen, once i started the top of the c like that there was no turning back

 

Let me know what you think. All crits are appreciated

 

that A in the second one needs to be taller

 

lado- the 2nd pic is a ice little simple looks clean, and the 3d is on point

 

Lado that first pic is garbagey. The second one is nice except the cross bar of the A should be thicker.
Reach i dont think the CH really flows, especially the c.

 

mone; straight up fire but the m's a bit weird....
ense; nice letters but i dont like the arrow.
rib; dont like the r-e connection or the c
lado; 2nd one it aiiite
sbane; as i said in toybook bar consistency and the top of the e is slanting down too much.

critz?

 

last summer in france

 

my bad about the blurry pic, god damn web cam camera sucks dick

 

every thing in here needs more aeroe's

 

trying to get as much criticism and advice as possible..