thx yes they are mine, except the mask from the left one was inspired from this guy [Broken External Image]:http://ursispaltenstein.ch/blog/images/uploads_img/game_pa_me.jpg
Dunsy: Those characters looks really well done, that game that you posted a flick of was fun too. the N in Nova (last pic): the Right part of it is too thin. I'd also make the O a tad bigger. also, take out the thing off the V (top left), it looks it's an N with half of it tucked behind the O. try squishing you A closer to the NOV. you have that same problem w/ your throw up, too. on that Viewtiful Joe character, try making his left leg, and left arm a bit fatter, also, fix his crotch/belly, it looks like a fat person's. the Face was spot on, though. Not digging the Random extension one the O in ONE, take the thing off the N (top right), smooth out the top of the E also. now, crit me. [Broken External Image]:http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo27.jpg
Vanishing point/simple So i worked on a simple, and used a vanishing point...the letters could be closer together i think, also i think the L's 3d got mad fu*ked when i went around it with silver. but anyways, here it is....could people please give me some crits? sorry its a bit blurry, i couldnt hold it steady enough for some reason.
dont really do a lot ov writtin but i tried a 3-d wondered wat u think but im pretty happy with it im expecting to be torn apart now lol =/ [Broken External Image]:http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2722/fullsize/20091025171537Photo186.jpg edit-omfg! viewtiful joe!! lol
you *****s need to stop trying to do 3D. Just assume that if you have to post in the toy thread, then you don't have the structure that it takes to pull off 3D.
Haha, good call. It is for a really close female friend of mine who's over in Belgium. Her birthday's comin' up, so I try to keep in touch with her and send her sketches here and there Thanks for the compliment too. On your sketches, your characters are lookin' dope. I would just suggest that on your letters, you keep an eye on the thickness of your bars and I'd lose the spade on your i on the first one. On your colored 'one', all three of your letters have different thicknesses, so it makes them stand out from one another. I'd lose the extension on the o too. I'm not feelin' the colored 'nova', but I like all of the last 'nova' other than the right bar on the n- thicken that up and that'd be straight. Thanks for the comments everyone, any more?
Weakfingers-Screw it. Keep it like that. I like it. Dunsy-sickness. B-it looks awesome. Uhhhh. Straighten up the fill on your 3d a bit? Its not quite finished or colored yet but should be today sometime. Crits?
supar-but as a toy, and still just learnin all techniques and shit, id be giving crits that in the end might not make sense. basicly saying how can i teach if i havent learned? cold-ok, ill redraw it and straigten up the 3d a bit. on the A bar extension the 3d is way off (i think). and the L's doesnt come to the edge the way it should.
Oh I thought I was replying to b my bad. Ignore what I said fathem. No one asked if you were a toy or not. Its obvious you are or you wouldn't be in here asking for crits. Give em to get em. Its the way things work. Speaking of which.........