Anybody remember me?

 

looking for input on structure





normally don't fuck with arrows but trying to fill some negative space

 

stick with the E from the top one and I'm not feeling the arrow from the inside of the U. Aside from that it looks good. I suggest maybe pulling the arrow at the top of the U in a bit tighter and see how that looks.

 

kuts.......the k proportions r fucked

 

i do! everyone thought you were biting Zewl and Rewt

That T doesnt work well, lose the extens on the N and the E doesnt seem to fit, some 3D is off as well, looks cool though

 

oh look

 

i liked it up until the "R" looked like it came from the bottom of the toilet

 

anyone down for an exchaange

 

bump this shit

 

everyones been sayin i need to start doing real simple letters..so im actually listenin ha.is this what i should be practicin?

 

just experiment, what u feel is right is what you need to keep on making

 

will do..thanks for the input. im likin that pic too

 

Jiska - Throwies pretty dope. Even though when you go out you wouldn't give a throw that much detail. Still nice.

Ajaw - Definitely rock Simps dude. For real. As Ribcage has said a numerous of times: If you can't rock a simp, then 90% of the time you can't rock anything with style.


I'm not feeling this piece I did all that much. E's too hidden. W is garbage. Few other things. Figured I'd post it anyways. This was more of a goofing off, testing random other things.

 

give letters more space .. E is to hidden .
try not to have letters overlapping each other
atleast not letters on right overlap letters to the left

 

some more simples i been workin on, jiska- im likin that..the gas mask is siick

 

Aiaw, work on your 3D and maybe spacing the letters a little better. Whitespace is awesome dude you just gotta know when/where to have it.
Flick for talking.

 

That's quite the name you've chosen there

 

It's not my name fool. I just like the guys style and tried out the letters.

 

iknow the lines are shaky