looks good ewal, work out the E, I've noticed the bars tend to be off (on this the top bar is fat) and try making the lines for you 3d as thick as the letters, or about as thick. looking like a too big of a difference.
@dic3 work on the steadiness of your lines and go simpler for now also, i was told to go simpler on my sketches a little so can i get crits on this? is this simple enough or should i go even simpler?
Skiz: Yes more simple. Look at Cred's progression. Read the "New to Graffiti" thread end to end. It will be helpful I promise... a bit boring, but helpful. You have potential. there are some key points that need work. You have bends and the extention on the back of the Z isn't working. The S needs work. Just review the basics and work from there.
SKIZ - try to get all your letters to match your Z and you prolly dont need that bottom bar on it less is more
i know these arent good at all but thought id put them up to see if im on the right track (which im probably not)... i read the "new to graff" page but i dont know how to make bars or whatever for my S and Z.. i like the flow i got goin in the top part but im tryin to find a way to transfer it to the K and I... any crits right now, or should i keep practicing? lol i like the s z in this one but i dont think the k and i would work in there the z is weird in this one i know. lol
^yeah, I write szar, and the z is always the hardest letter to style. I'm not sure why :/ just keep it up and sketch like no ones business and then it should slowly begin to progress.
skiz: you have an advantage of sorts here. you can have symentry by just flipping your S around for a Z or vice versa. if you want a natrual looking S try drawing two circles and make the s around them keepin it the same width all the way through.
yeah thanks i noticed that symmetry and im likin it. haha.. i think my problem is with the k and i.. im tryin to get them to match the s and z's flow to make it look put together nicely.
^^no drop the character bs and focus on your letters first. I fuckin suck at piecing ppl name a few established writers who do nice simps, so I can pick up some different ideas,schemes (bite) lol
Hey guys , this is my first "piece" of 2012 and would just like some critique. I would critique others, but im not sure I'm good enough to be giving advice. I'm like, legit sorry if this picture turns out massive. Oh and I loooove simple stuff - Thanks for any feedback, good or bad.