Damn this is wack man. The letters are all fucked, the leg of the R must be thicker, the O well ok, the W is too fucking small. Your lines are shaky. The 3D is off at the O. ITS WACK WACK WACK. Get some dry wall or shit and paint on that.
i know but i ran out off silver so had to do it the way it was and then it started raining so it was hard to do the outline because off drips ect
@ Row there's a feed on here that will help you out, it helped me http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread
@dankbuds - i like the colors man. should have gave a shout out to jamaica. not really digging the lines in the 3d tho. you have to many in my opinion. sometimes less is more @ROW - big africa said it all @venom - i want to bite that O
this is the first thing ive ever painted, and its shit. But I thought id just post for some crits anyway since any advice at all will help
hey man remember what i told u about the highlights and where to put them based on where ur 3d comes off, always on the opposite side... the M looks the best in this because theyre more or less in the right spot... but like the bottom of the L and E shouldnt get those white highlights, and u can bring them across the tops of ur letters instead, basically when ur 3d is going down and left like that, make all ur highlights to the top and right ... with that said, thats the best shit u ever did son! lol feelin the rasta fill
Did a simple with some half empty dollar cans, then took some flicks of all the other stuff on the wall. Sorry for such giant picture size.