Millix: Not simple enough and your alphabets are wiggly and inconsistant. Straighten them up and keep'em even. see the "new to graffiti" thread for tips and tricks.
the best thing about that piece is that it's on a celing tile. straight up im stealin that idea haha. as for crits id say get rid of most if not all of the extensions, since alot of them come out of nowhere and serve no purpose. bars could use some work but aren't that bad. overall i like it . and centry that piece is sick but sams are shit. smoke phillies.
1st one was better. and lol that sucks man. where i live in canada they have phillies in every convenience store. only thing i can never find is swishers. its a fuckin tragedy
you owe your friend a new tile!... jk but that Y looks more like a 4 and lose the arrows... 1 is ok but 7 is to much in my eyes but nice color...
Fasho, thanks man. There are a handful of letters I need to familiarize myself with a bit more. But yeah, my hand is way too fucking shakey.
i just randomly dropped this shit... havent done too many simps or anything but this doesnt look too bad
move your hand in a quicker less tense movement ... your lines are shakey because you trying real hard and drawing super slow
last one for now. The L could be better, and the E could be a little more symmetrical to the S, but other than that, this is an improvement right?