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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    stigma- lose the extensions, dont connect all the letters. make the bars more even in size
    Dead- thats a pretty solid simple I would just change the bottom of the E
    mogan- not feelin it. the block-is extensions on both bars of the m dont fit with the piece


    crits on mine please
     
  2. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    DeaD 1 Banggin Image in the your getttin booooonkers (STyles Lookin hot)
    thats wha t i mean by it dont know

    keep that fire helicopters

    If you wanna be a graffiti artist you gotta learn to bomb the hardest
     
  3. Moon

    Moon Senior Member

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    God dammit Mogan, I love your style so much.
     
  4. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    it's pretty simplistic but thanks bro
     
  5. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man
    stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome
    deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely
    pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool
    here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up

    [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg
     
  6. ..(((DeAdOnE)))..

    ..(((DeAdOnE))).. Member

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    Thanx to eyerone for the input. It's all well noted and will be put to good use.
     
  7. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Looks tight as always bro! your pieces always have a bold kick to them.. I would suggest a darker backround because it would make your bright pieces pop out...
    That N is a K lol... The word says Moke... it is for my homie that writes Moke13
     
  8. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    wgone- thats ill. maybe a pink background?
     
  9. unique93

    unique93 Member

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  10. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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    ur not toy unique haha go away lol that is ill by the way,
    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i309_bobthecow173_Picture6900.jpg
    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i309_bobthecow173_Picture6898.jpg
    CRITS
     
  11. Saint0913

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    here is a superhero one i did for fun...

    ai909.photobucket.com_albums_ac296_Saint0913_68343_491599290930_634585930_7548695_356755_n.jpg
     
  12. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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  13. SYFER1

    SYFER1 Member

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  14. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    been a while since ive been to my fav. toy forum!

    been even longer since i posted anything work wise as well.

    so, here is a product of boredom and highness.

    love and hate welcome, just because your a mod dont mean your not toy.

    http://blip.tv/file/get/Fubar-sketchTestCam715.wmv
     
  15. ..(((DeAdOnE)))..

    ..(((DeAdOnE))).. Member

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  16. BRAZE-TWO

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    @DeadOne, Thats sick, keep up the great work.
     
  17. Res-tooth Slims

    Res-tooth Slims Senior Member

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    wgone...that middle piece with the peeling off paper effect thing is bangin..props indeed
     
  18. unique93

    unique93 Member

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    man...i think i am toy...because i draw sketches only one year...thanks for comment :D
    sorry for my bad english :D
     
  19. Keso

    Keso Senior Member

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    I came.
     
  20. ..(((DeAdOnE)))..

    ..(((DeAdOnE))).. Member

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    Bro your 3d is way off buddy I'd work on it.
    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i309_bobthecow173_Picture6900.jpg
    The fill on 3d is a lil confusing to the eye.
    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i309_bobthecow173_Picture6898.jpg
    CRITS[/QUOTE]