stigma- lose the extensions, dont connect all the letters. make the bars more even in size Dead- thats a pretty solid simple I would just change the bottom of the E mogan- not feelin it. the block-is extensions on both bars of the m dont fit with the piece crits on mine please
DeaD 1 Banggin Image in the your getttin booooonkers (STyles Lookin hot) thats wha t i mean by it dont know keep that fire helicopters If you wanna be a graffiti artist you gotta learn to bomb the hardest
mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg
Looks tight as always bro! your pieces always have a bold kick to them.. I would suggest a darker backround because it would make your bright pieces pop out... That N is a K lol... The word says Moke... it is for my homie that writes Moke13
been a while since ive been to my fav. toy forum! been even longer since i posted anything work wise as well. so, here is a product of boredom and highness. love and hate welcome, just because your a mod dont mean your not toy. http://blip.tv/file/get/Fubar-sketchTestCam715.wmv
man...i think i am toy...because i draw sketches only one year...thanks for comment sorry for my bad english
Bro your 3d is way off buddy I'd work on it. The fill on 3d is a lil confusing to the eye. CRITS[/QUOTE]