pen freestyle: lifes not a bitch lifes a beautiful woman you only call her a bitch cause she wont let you get that pussy - aesop rock
Some good shit on this site. Props! [Broken External Image]:http://www.shrani.si/f/2P/7e/3bmrmjK1/img0005.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.shrani.si/f/B/kI/1I33DLRo/img0006.jpg
^lose the extensions and work on outlining your letters cleaner, looks like stephen hawking did that shit for you. crits for everyone on the last page MONE- the p is too tilted, extension in U is bogus, the top right bar of your K doesnt flow (apparently Im the only person who says this every single time you do a K lol.) the 3-d could use some work too. STUCK- good shit. The second E isnt that great, middle bar especially. Lovin that R. the bottom of the E and S where they overlap dont rally flow together TEZER- DOOOPE! lovin that funky fill and that Z is fire NOESR- Good shit bro. The canvas is ill so is the painted piece, sick can control. The O on the painted one could be connected better at the bottom, it just looks a lil strange like that GRAE- the first flic is dope do more shit like that. Not feelin the other two as much BRAINS- loving all that except the green one. The I and S on the first sketch are sick nasty bro. Your throws are dope too especially the way you do your O's CLOUT- dope. the A seems a little stiff compared to the other letters but thats just my opinion SWEA- something about your stuff makes me think youre biting, but ehh i gots no proof. The w needs the most work. The rest of the letters structure is aight but they come out lookin sloppy from the outline RESN- nice little simples but please dont write resn just google that shit dude ok im not intermediate but lemme get some crits please couldnt fit this all on my scanner, looks a lot better as a whole lol [Broken External Image]:http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/3962/scan0009.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/7783/scan0008g.jpg
somber, you seem like a unconsistant drawer, im geussing just because i feel like you progress then dun-progress lol try being more consistant cuz your letters aint to great on that last sketch ive seen better from you that top jabka is dopeeee
penis bumps SEZER-drop a shadow PEKINS-try experimenting a bit...everything is the same...and ugly SANC-you have good potential View attachment 601852 View attachment 601853 View attachment 601854
Pekins start posting in the Toy black book thread you know that your pics do not belong here and you have even said it yourself lol... YO Esoe that top one man! It looks great keep improving that style man... @Jabka: I dig that first pic good shit...
Esoe i feel like ive seen all of those pics before, your style is so dope but i think you should try some different stuff
keep doin but atleast post new shit fuck hsve seriosly been not feeling my shit lately nor the colors nor the outline fuck...... started this but idk if ill finish
do u use watercolor, bait? and how long does it take you on an average to finish coloring a piece like this one on blackbook, and how long does it take you to finish it on wall if you paint walls
i use copics if im not lazy i can do it real fast like 20-30 min(this piece) n if i kno how i want to color it uhhh i unfortunately dont paint much fails on me
shit dude, 30 mins to do THIS coloring job? I say that's impressive dude, such a shame you dont paint much. you could wreck shit :\ big props man keep it up
respect bait your skill is awesome is there anything specific you did to help build your pieces when you first started?
cool was just wondering if there was anything specific that helped you... I just gotta buy my time n practice