[Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...572660117317_1259960572_1513533_2344800_n.jpg Hey thanks guys for all the crits, I'm gonna keep just throwing all my shit up here.
Arzo, i think you should try to make all your letters the same size, and even on the bottom. Willis1989/Wise, i like your throw, but the "w" seems off to me. maybe try some different styles. Rems, not gonna lie the mario throwie is way doper than the second one. id go out and paint that one just for shits and giggles, cause its pretty original(sp?) couple of less than sober sketches from the last few days. [Broken External Image]:http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/4940/picture0004r.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4332/picture0005e.jpg
Alright, so besides this deeply thought provoking and in-depth constructive criticism, any other tips? its not like i think my shits good, hell i know its pretty awful right now, but ive only been writing for like a month and wouldn't mind learning how to improve a little instead of having online douchebags insulting me without any useful information or coherent thought.
Just some stuff I've been sketchin.. crits i guess?? [Broken External Image]:http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphoto...616390694_102613706462485_26494_7647077_s.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphoto...6043056918_102613706462485_26517_901347_s.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...0639723125_102613706462485_26571_886624_n.jpg idk why everything is different sizes ??
Yo dude. See the guy above the dude you're yellin at? He said 'cant we just...' and the other guy said 'stop writing graffiti?'. ... You should think before you accuse people.
You bit this directly from the internet. Don't do that. [Broken External Image]:http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9733/throw.png To wise, that's better, try losing the wings on the w and doing something with the i
Thanks for the advice, I didnt know wot to do with the W without making it look like every other bubble W
from tonight: [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY7AUGUST2010008.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY7AUGUST2010010.jpg
my bad, i suppose i jumped the gun on that one. I was just getting annoyed at the lack of real critz, and the overabundance of insults/sacrastic comments. phillip m, no hate man. Hey Sbal, good catch on that bite lol, i know bitings frowned upon but i wanted some tips to sort of make it my own, just cause i love the big overextended tops on those letters. smokeitup/dkode, i dunno if youve done fills yet, but i think that would have looked nicer filled in then outlined in a different color, that way you dont see other tags poking through the hollow parts. [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9159/picture0009l.jpg if at first you dont succeed... sketch sketch again...
Chill Horse, we're toys, they're supposed to go hardcore on us, how the hell we're supposed to learn other way?? Yeah, they can say it the nice way like 'Fuck yeah, that's great dude, but myb if you changed this lil' thing?' some would go 'Heeeell no, if it's so great like u say, why the f would I change it??' Soo, they go lil' harder like 'That sucks, yo skillz are shit, if u even have any, start all over again u toy', n u get mad, n u write, n u write, n u write... N one day your skillz get mad, you make some ill piece just to make em stop. Right? Damn right! Just my opinion, no hard feelings Keep it real!
That kinda looks the joint I did against NoCanControl. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo96.jpg Any way, when doing an R that has that little kick, you don't just draw a circle. I can't really describe how to do it by using words, so I guess I'll just bump this youtube video (or slideshow rather) of Skuf from New York. /Lolbite See how he starts the K near the bottom part of the S? Follow that, and you'll be able to see how the kick thing is done. Straighten up that M too, it looks all droopy. Oh, and don't sketch your throws, EVER.