i took 4 letters cause im still practicing wen i get better i'll add letters dont sit there callin *****s out when ur new to BS yo, real talk
I think its dope, but that toon for the O has got a lot going on for a bomb. Maybe tone that down. Looks ill son. What burough you write?
View attachment 509420 jel- good stuff stre- you need to make them less fat man they look like bubbles..
melo - needs work.. the M is fucked,the O is fucked, E and L go ok together but make letters the same size
Dank- Your probs gonna win the battle, that shit is looking proper. Yarbles- I've been feeling the grimy stuff... I like overlapping lines. Kid reny- It looks simple and clean, Zarb. I like how you can tell your letters are looser now.The style looks more natural to me now then befor with your older stuff. The guy who drinks tea-That M as simple as it is kinda reminds me of SUEME'S. Its simple as fuck but yeah, just a suggestion.. I'm trying to stop going super slow and keep all my proportions right and trying to have a more natural, one line per letter' faster style. I know its all super unproportioned but this is what ive come up within an hour.
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo143.jpg Weakfingers- Your shit totally looks more natural, I like it all its good your starting to go faster Melo- Your older shit a few pages back looks better
hows this for a throw? @thatguywhodrinkstea: your throw isnt bad try and keep the letters all the same size.. i like the shading and fix up the C i kinda fucked up the drop shadow [Broken External Image]:http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/kaspoutline.jpg
View attachment 509696 View attachment 509697 View attachment 509698 View attachment 509699 yeh i know my new shit is weak this is some oldstyle stuff crits on this? ters- you should try to fit your whole e in kasp- round ur P and a new k
@thatguywhodrinkstea: haha ive gone through so many K's XD and haha were u startin beef with someone on that first pic lol
just practicing Tried a dif. T, crits Melo- you need practice yo, ur letters are like making an arch at the bottoms and ur E's need work, youll get better