i took 4 letters cause im still practicing wen i get better i'll add letters dont sit there callin *****s out when ur new to BS yo, real talk

 

yo real talk,
post count dont mean shit...

 

Nevermind
I completely missread that haha

 

I think its dope, but that toon for the O has got a lot going on for a bomb. Maybe tone that down. Looks ill son. What burough you write?

 

Jel one reps Queens, Im out in LI

 

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jel- good stuff
stre- you need to make them less fat man they look like bubbles..

 

melo - needs work.. the M is fucked,the O is fucked, E and L go ok together but make letters the same size

 

Dank- Your probs gonna win the battle, that shit is looking proper.
Yarbles- I've been feeling the grimy stuff... I like overlapping lines.
Kid reny- It looks simple and clean,
Zarb. I like how you can tell your letters are looser now.The style looks more natural to me now then befor with your older stuff.
The guy who drinks tea-That M as simple as it is kinda reminds me of SUEME'S. Its simple as fuck but yeah, just a suggestion..

I'm trying to stop going super slow and keep all my proportions right and trying to have a more natural, one line per letter' faster style. I know its all super unproportioned but this is what ive come up within an hour.

 

Weakfingers i think your is so good.

 

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do something like this and try to keep the lines smooth..

 

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Weakfingers- Your shit totally looks more natural, I like it all its good your starting to go faster
Melo- Your older shit a few pages back looks better

 

hows this for a throw?
@thatguywhodrinkstea: your throw isnt bad try and keep the letters all the same size.. i like the shading and fix up the C

i kinda fucked up the drop shadow
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yeh i know my new shit is weak this is some oldstyle stuff crits on this?

ters- you should try to fit your whole e in
kasp- round ur P and a new k

 

@thatguywhodrinkstea: haha ive gone through so many K's XD and haha were u startin beef with someone on that first pic lol

 

nah man

 

@thatguywhodrinkstea: what do u think of my S?

 

just practicing
Tried a dif. T, crits

Melo- you need practice yo, ur letters are like making an arch at the bottoms and ur E's need work, youll get better

 

^ thats ugly.... the 2nd letter, not a fucking T at all...

 

@Kidreny!: dude to much shadow dont add any on the last letter