Man, It seems you post every-single thing you do. Like work shit out on your own for a day or two. Its like when ever i go out to do shit i come back and theres like 5 of the same throw posted by you. No hating or anything im just saying draw for like 2-3 days on your own then comeback with new idea's. Listen to what people have to say about there crits and build off it.
Your right, didnt really relize i was postin so much till someone pointed it out just now lol, i get what ur sayin.
its better but that r circle part is lookin pretty bad Make sure it's a full circle not some half oval thing
TERS, quite like the bottom one. The T/E seem less rounded than the RS though, knocks the flow out a bit.
View attachment 509803 new name first attempt nine- that style is dope man ters- maybe less fatty letterS?
because i found out that there was another melo who rolls with some writers which are up there in my city
If it's in your city then change it, If hes like in a different city then don't worry.(unless he's famous in your area) Writes are known more for their style than names.