really diggin the M and the E on that one actually, the U and S are hurting tho. i suggest not to lean the U so much to the side and even out the bar widths on the S a bit more and the whole thing needs a bit more flow. i also think that 3D woulda looked better than drop shadow , but hey thats just my opinion brah. keep it up
Mues - Maybe try making the other top of the U taller and the bottom of the S is too big. Sore - R and the E look pretty good, O is thinner, and the S just looks bad. C looks horrible I know. Crits on these?
you suck cock man, vigo, nah me and my homie are gonna go straight with it ill cut int othe purp up top and hell cut into jack
you can't go simpler, but your shadows ARE off.. and the superman diamond HAS to go dude... or girl.. whatever you are. might have to call you "it"
My bad tasty haha. Didnt see that shit sorry, and I mean I pretty much only do simples dude. You don't even know. I do 1 piece or other drawing compared to like 50 simples all different. BUT IM WORKING ON IT. Did this in math lol it looks funny
now thats on point (more or less). some of the bar widths are a little weird, but not bad all in all. from there you can start adding minor extensions and connections, and slowly evolve that style/.
i actually posted my last post (like 3 pages back, soopakalafrajilistik...) cos i was wondering about lining the letters up (and for the practice... DUH!). I didn't line em up much cos i reckon it makes the shadow look like an uninteresting block, especially in something with lots of letters that have a solid bottom. Having the letters climb over each other a bit means i can have some corners and stuff showing up in the shadow. Also i just dont flow ruler even and never have. So i was looking for oppinions on whether slightly uneven letters for a more interesting shadow is a bad idea, and whether i should work on getting my flow ruler straight or just go with it since it IS my real flow. For the record, everything before that post was during a slight weed dry spell and i swear i forgot what the fuck i was trying to do. After i got back on the sticky i remembered that i normally rock a line like superkalafrajilistik in about 2-3 mins add about 2 more for shadow. Simply speaking, i wasn't flowing from letter to letter, i was trying to emulate a stencil. I don't normally write anything like that. I'm uber embarressed. Not that i think anything i've done since then is any better, just more ME. Not that i condone drug use...
because the shadow from the half way point down is off. The bottom protion of the s and left side of the bottom of the O go the wrong direction. I agree with tasty, start experimenting a bit, but when it comes to 3d and shadows you gotta be careful it can make a simple look good or just make it look bent in odd directions etc. Attention to detail is key. Work it out. nickle: I suck at throws bad so you may not wanna listen too close.... but maybe try something like this. red is suggested lines, pink I think should be dropped all together and blue are suggested connection points. guys you wanna crit my crits as I suck at throws?
thanks for the tips pete, yeah after i was done and looked at the day after i thought the arrows shouldnt be there either, making it too complicated, AND they are both kinda facing the same direction without even lines
pointman - i like it, the background kinda reminds me of puke though pez - the only good letter is the A in the middle, so make all the rest simple like that did this on some tree bark i got from my back yard , crits please