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rayz-lookin great, i like the throwie zest-can use some work, but i like the fill in crits. gotta new name. SCEL
scel ur shading could use a bit more work...maybe try some on the bottom and less on top (look at stussy's above u). and ur e kinda through me off, thought it was another c.
Thx for tha crits guys, CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.
nice...simile i guess u could call it. but yea, i can picture some bubbles in there making it look better, i'll work on that. thx
wow...it actually doesn't look to bad a bit more bubbly imo [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image502.jpg and my attempt at shadowing... [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image503.jpg
Zest- Brilliant shit I really like it. Also the same guy from youtube? Rayz- I am diggin that shit. Makin me not even wanna post my shit. Scel- Just keep working. Try to add your own style to it. Not just bubble letters. View attachment 485929
shruk*n- Looking good man, only thing that sicks out to me is the top of the C, doesn't look right aekone- Love it man. I like how the lines are connected in a few spots and it's not just plain bubble letters. View attachment 485932 View attachment 485933
aekone: i think there are too many overlapping lines...like for the indents for the e's, m's, etc...it seems to me like you were trying to do it fast, try and do it slower, and take your time
Mes, ur right, the C doesn't look right... [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image504.jpg the c still kinda looks a bit off to me, but nothing but a bit of playing around with it should fix that. o and my sharpie was running out so i had to use pen for shadowing...but i prob shouldn't worry about shadowing now
yea, then i decided to color it in and shit. it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image505.jpg
cybe ... for starters, if you are saying ur work looks cool/is good/is not BAD, etc., be prepared to get RIPPED. cuz bud that is NOT that good. at all. your letters are not uniform, tha bubbling is off in that regard, tha shading is weak, but thats ok cuz erryone is new at this at some point so keep working HARD on it. let OTHERS tell you it looks good (if it does indeed look good) and dont self promote cuz ur gonna look straight silly.
i know this is the throwie thread...but yo mes good job taking my advice with the add-ons! the spiral looks good but try the dots on the other side next to the M...
yea, i was looking back at what i said, and i shouldn't have done that...sorry, if i offended anyone, if that's possible with what i said