tempo- did you not notice that the first time????? like wtf bro! i can do better than that an i just started!! more effert woulsd be nice when your doing an exchange! i would be pissed if that happened to me!
woah beko not much room to talk and calm down on the beef its not even your exchange, although i agree that the piece is not all that great haha maybe another try tempo with a little more effort
COLORS- the D looks a lot like an O if it wasnt for you saying naked i would think it was NAKEO. but the rest of the letters i like a lot! but on the E i dont like those pointy little spikes they just dont go with the rest of it. and just some of those random straight blue lines without the fades just dont look appealing to me! i would also enjoy some crits please!
Bek just use wicked simple stuff dont go for all that arrow jazz just regular letters with no flair for now, and dont outline each individual bar, if you know what i mean? like in that piece dont outline the bars inside the letter like in the middle of the k where all the bars meet. look at my piece i guess for the outline
arright reach look man, u write i had 2 slow it down n' put a good light on so I could see wat im doin lol. the last one was half ass wont deny it. sry bout that but I did try to focus wit this much more but it only a start jus a pencil outline so... any thoughts where to go wit it?
well I did not plan on this to turn out so bizzare looking, I did fit all the letters but yet plenty to improve on no doubt. my C turnd a lil E'ish and that is just the tip of the iceburg, once I got started I just started adding on mad diff ish... anyways sorry to dissapoint fellas. I'll just keep trying
no look at the left side of your R. wiiiicked fat bar. now look at the leg of your R, thats like 1/3 the size. keep all the bars the same width
As my exchange wasn't the best either. Nor am I good. At this point... This thread still makes me want to punch myself in the face. Colors - That left leg on that N needs fixing. I wouldn't bend it that way. I would keep it straight. It seems to mess the entire letter. Your A and K are the best letters. The bottom of your E is all fucked. The D looks like an O you need to straighten out the left side of it.
and yeah they do overlap too much also. just keep them the same size(the letters and bars) and GO SIMPLE hah
^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.