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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    looks dope was your vagina moist after it was finished? jk
     
  2. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    cant face the truth is the tip of the iceberg
     
  3. pocket

    pocket Member

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    I like it man, the W is a little straight and boring compared to the others.
     
  4. ohsogreasy

    ohsogreasy New Member

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    my black loptop counts as a blackbook right? here's something I did in a facebook battle recently, the 3d was done in photoshop, thats it. ai1103.photobucket.com_albums_g468_funkyabstract_gotra.jpg

    and here's this

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    **ALSO if anyone wants to do a full collab I'm looking for a partner to do like a black/white prodo with, so holler!
     
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  5. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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  6. Beko

    Beko Senior Member

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    crits please! the k's leg may need some shortening up on the bottom.
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  7. OctoVenom

    OctoVenom Senior Member

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    Props to everyone. Just keep at it dont give up. And your style will come natuarly trust me. Peace out whoop whoop
     
  8. sanberdoo

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  9. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Beko, your letters are overlapping to much, give them some room to breathe.
     
  10. Svc

    Svc Senior Member

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    hey im back, been about a year or so since ive been here, heres some of the latest
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  11. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Beko. Take it easy, don't press so hard with the pencil. (it's easier to erase and fix, it doesn't leave "carbon copies" in the pages below it.) Your curved letters tend to get bulbous in parts for now try and keep them even. For example the bottom of the B and O. The center of the B where the two curved portions meet is a bit too thick. Try making it the width of the bar from the top. Keep it up.
     
  12. SkateJunt

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  13. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    Looking like crap! The bar consistency is everywhere different, comon you must do straights like a real mafakka, check your keyboard.
     
  14. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Naked exchange. crits for improvement? naked.jpg
     
  15. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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    more simps, didnt bother with 3d, and sadgeh ive been drawing my keyboard for the past 3 weeks, im trying to tweak the letters a bit
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    Picture 122 by SkateJunt, on Flickr
     
  16. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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  17. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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  18. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    Phat, just fuckin blast it out. Something that big's guna be awesome anyway. Only thing i'd say is space the letters out a little bit more. That is all!!

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  19. Lado

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    I'm not one of those guys, I don't think, but I think 'karma' could use a little tweaking to flow a little bit better, and the 'R' in 'Absorbing' can be defined a little bit more. Try making the look bigger and bring the leg back a little bit. These crits aren't too important, it'll look sweet no matter what. There was a huge highway piece in Jersey a while ago, I forget exactly but I think it was something like "Destroy-create-rebuild" or something like that. Looking forward to flicks of the finished product.
     
  20. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    dont bring the middle of the m to the ground, bring it up a tad like where that bar crosses the a, give it more negative space, and watch those bar widths (A's & K's particulary look bad). There arent enough cracks either, makes it look like just a bunch of fucked up lines imo, doesnt really give it that cracked effect unless you use the perfect amount

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