Sync, i think you have a good idea of what graff is but i also think you need to tone it back a bit with all the extensions and such.
SkateJunt.... Simple simple simple simple simple please

 

Thanks, TBS. Much appreciated. I'll try to get some clean pieces out in the next few days and not try to go too 'wild' with the extensions till I get the full hang of things. Thanks!

 

like this stuff?

 

no worries sync.
yeah. like that. but clean those up. take your time with it. make sure all your letters are the same height and all your bars are the same width.
anyone got any crits on mine?

 

your stuff looks really sick, think you should be postin in intermediate

 

did this at school, got some fucked bars, and the ut is wack, fuck the whole things pretty wack, but imma paint it on sunday

 

i don't like the extensions but the basis of the letters is pretty cool

 

thats a straight letter though, wheres the simps with flow?

 

I smell bacon

 

In my pants.

 

^yeah... I doubt it. The only thing you have in your pants is a baby dick

I love bacon

 

Not even mad. Been lurking to long to fall for your trolling.

 

i scream, you scream, we all scream for bacon!

 

...not trolling, just speaking the truth.

yeah, im doing this for credits... so what, gotta get that free shipping before christmas

 

I could dig the most bottom left simp.

 

here ya go broke
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Ribs of that first load, bottom left simp is cool as fuck.
cheers Slotr, will get something down for ya in the next couple days.
unfinished piece for talk. i think there's too much going on and i spent too long looking at 'BATES' pieces....

 

glad you guys like that one, wish i woulda flicked it after it got painted, hella fucked the R up in the sketch tho...


as for yours broke, its pretty tight, The B and R look the same, and the connection at the bottom of them is ugly. You should really try to define that K a tad bit more, looks like a K X hybrid, I think on the right bar the top part where it meets the left bar its a little too chubby, if it was thinner or that line curved the other way it might of defined it a tad better. The Arrows coming off the middle part of the E are kind of bad, but its a good idea, you shoulda made the Arrow the middle part, instead of an extension, and then kept the swirly extension ya dig? Cause if the middle part of E cam off as that arrow, Itd be ill