skum- i like you fill on the letters, kinda cool. i think i need to fix my s in this...? but crits are much needed
Illest dude in town dun cap mah hollow ting ting, dayummmm. Probation is done soon, so kid(s), like this dude, best watch for crush mode styling in months to come, fucking whackness.
Same shit goin' on in my hood. Fuck it, they'll be gone when summer comes. All the hoodrats come out when it's dark at 4pm...
@ patchy- whas that say? slm? keep workin on it it needs alot of work dont bother coloring it in for now just do out lines with a pen/pencil and add shadow. work on that S make it all flow
Sin- The S seems to have too much dead space, not as bubbly as the others. moistgarbagecan- Idk what that square hangin off the right is for, it looks outta place, other then that I can't really say, not a good pic. View attachment 540604 Crits? The E has too much dead space I think.
wheres wooney at i want more wooney, ima be furture ima be a hoe reson that you ever wanna come to a show i be kicken down the door
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Need to slow down and take more time on the fill. But speed up with the outlines so you don't get drips. Looks like 3D at the bottom but drop shadow at the top of the letters. Fix that.