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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    finally had time to draw this weekend, think i might of posted 1 of these before it was finished...idk if there a thread for abstract so its goin here, shit might turn out after i put the shines on, got no white tho
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    @zewl aint really diggin the way u did your Z, the way you made the bars connecting unsmoothly so many times(if that makes sense) i think the top part is fine but the bottom half makes it look weird and then the way it overlaps the e makes it so u cant really see its an e. and u threw in a couple weird extensions like at the top left bar of the W...just my 2 cents
     
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  2. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    for an exchange.not finished yet.still need to color it.but idk about how ima go about that shit.


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  3. Dcicfhbimv

    Dcicfhbimv Senior Member

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    looks alright not a huge fan of the swirl on the end of the "t" though. and the "y' may look kinda tight if it had a similar style to the end of the "h" . Other than that its pretty chill might try yellow green and black <-just my take pastel green regular yellow and thick black lines would work pretty well.



     
  4. Dcicfhbimv

    Dcicfhbimv Senior Member

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    Been working on my letters it reads sane. Hopefully it's a step forward even though it was a quickie. Anyone have any ideas for some words to write I'm trying to get used to all the letters and can't find what I'm looking for yet.

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  5. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    next time throw both of those in the same post so you dont have to make 2. It's alright but the bars are pretty messed up, the s looks alright with the way you made it thin but it doesnt fit the rest of the letters because none of the others are thin. i would stick to consistent widths for your bars for now
     
  6. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    bottom page bump
     
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  7. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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  8. ian

    ian Elite Member

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  9. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    lmfao,i agree.


    romero - i really like that looks kinda euro style,id just take of the arrow on the bottom of the h and the swirl on the t..i think a thick black outline would look fresh.

    ian - thats the best ive seen from you,keep doing simples like that,it will pay off. only thing i dont like is how u bended the "e" at the bottom.

    ribcage - the "reach" peice isnt too bad,just watch were your bending some of the letters because some parts looks wierd, also your coloring is nice but you shouldnt be focused on that ,work on letters first.

    sane - dont write sane..and work on more simple letters.
     
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  10. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^ fasho, the r is pretty fucked
     
  11. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    yeah i didnt like that E once i finished it but oh well
     
  12. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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  13. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    ure double posting
    arent we done with this sketch already ?
     
  14. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    it's a totally different sketch...just still can't come up with a good W...
     
  15. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    I'm a toy ass prick. I know.
     
  16. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    I don't think you understand how much time of your life you just wasted to try and be funny...and failed.. :(
     
  17. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    looks pretty much the same to me, so imma give u the same crits as last time... do an upside down M. if it helps, flip the page.
     
  18. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    Nah, not to be funny, just to be a douche. And it took like, 10 seconds lol
     
  19. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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  20. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    @Phat: Definitely not feelin all those swirls bro. Gives me a headache

    I really like the way this one turned out. Any thoughts?

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