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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Yeah dead thosemake it look weird.
    Tofe the e on the yellow looks too big and theres a phallus coming out of your O, making it look like a Q
     
  2. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

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    Fetes, you need to work on staying somewhat consistent in your thickness for your letters.
     
  3. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Tofe, keep the top build off that but change/work on the E
     
  4. TheBoredOne

    TheBoredOne Member

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    ai47.tinypic.com_n1fnkn.jpg
    one i did in class

    Used:

    RollerBall Pen
    Some Wierd Marker

    there was no pencil outline so :\
     
  5. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    Just... don't do that, man.
    That swoosh thing in all of your letters.
    Just knock that down a couple of pegs, and make the holes in your B and R more, like, evenly distributed.
     
  6. TheBoredOne

    TheBoredOne Member

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    yeah i didnt like it either but i did it with a pen so :p

    thanks :)
     
  7. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

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    I agree with FV, and your b needs a lottta work.
     
  8. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

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  9. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    You need to use bars to make your letters, and that blue shit around the letters need to go, you should also work on your 3D
     
  10. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Yeah just color in your shadow those little keyboard lines are distracting
     
  11. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    AHAHAHAHAHA I FOUND MY FIRST EVER GRAFFITI SHITTT AHAHAHAHAHA
    my crazy wild styleessss
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  12. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Y0 D@WG TH053 @R3 D1111ZZZZ0P333!!! 101010lo0lololo
     
  13. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    bump for critz. says smog
     
  14. TheBoredOne

    TheBoredOne Member

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    its not so much the b cause that was just an accidental fuck up i need to work on my R's'

    your M looks like and E your O looks like the number 8 o.o
     
    Last edited: Jun 16, 2010
  15. Meph*

    Meph* Guest

    ima redraw it to do a bigger piece with colors...crits and tips are DEEPLY appreciated!!!

    View attachment 569291
     
  16. mfatik88

    mfatik88 New Member

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  17. Amends_Ego

    Amends_Ego Senior Member

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    mfatik- top one lose the awkword bend in the right leg of the a and bring the middle bar over and connect it.
    bottom one you got more unneccessary extenstions and you need to make the left leg of the a connect to the right one at the top.

    Meph-my tip, dont mess it up

    kew- dude that shit was like one the top of the last page, i didn't not get crits because nobody saw it...we all saw it it didn't get crits cause nobody was tripping face on mushrooms. Im gonna go with whoever said it just looks like a bunch of boomerangs shaded at diffrent levels...thats my crit.
     
  18. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    ^ is that a compliment or an insult
     
  19. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    its definitely an overkill. i saw the S and after looking HARD i saw the G.
     
  20. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

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    Isn't every fuck up accidental haha?