Yeah dead thosemake it look weird. Tofe the e on the yellow looks too big and theres a phallus coming out of your O, making it look like a Q
Just... don't do that, man. That swoosh thing in all of your letters. Just knock that down a couple of pegs, and make the holes in your B and R more, like, evenly distributed.
You need to use bars to make your letters, and that blue shit around the letters need to go, you should also work on your 3D
its not so much the b cause that was just an accidental fuck up i need to work on my R's' your M looks like and E your O looks like the number 8 o.o
ima redraw it to do a bigger piece with colors...crits and tips are DEEPLY appreciated!!! View attachment 569291
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mfatik- top one lose the awkword bend in the right leg of the a and bring the middle bar over and connect it. bottom one you got more unneccessary extenstions and you need to make the left leg of the a connect to the right one at the top. Meph-my tip, dont mess it up kew- dude that shit was like one the top of the last page, i didn't not get crits because nobody saw it...we all saw it it didn't get crits cause nobody was tripping face on mushrooms. Im gonna go with whoever said it just looks like a bunch of boomerangs shaded at diffrent levels...thats my crit.