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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

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  2. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    Knowledge, much the same as everyone else but it's clean as fuck and all looks good apart from that extension on the S.
    Dank, i don't like the top of the R and the I looks too static. try to give it some movement
    Gemer, the K and W are alright but then it gets a bit squashed together. not bad though.

    can i get some worth while crits on this?
     
  3. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Dank - Getting some simps down, I'd like to see you try some fills.
     
  4. gim

    gim Senior Member

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    first time trying to piece, crits appreciated disregard the garbage tag lol
     
  5. The Silent One

    The Silent One Member

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    shit's tight! i wanna see some good 3d tho you. start to eloborate!
     
  6. eriekid

    eriekid Senior Member

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    say what you want haha crits on the tag? 248543_109599122463632_100002406358398_97242_585810_n.jpg 251088_109610465795831_100002406358398_97301_1686964_n.jpg ape shit.jpg feel free to hate.jpg revive tag.jpg sick black book.jpg
     
  7. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    This has to be the worst so far.
     
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  8. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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  9. malto

    malto Senior Member

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  10. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    take your time a bit more with the lines, just to neaten them up. and work on that handy a bit. keep it up though. i reckon your heading in the right direction

    Temp - lose that kick on the right side of the A
     
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  11. malto

    malto Senior Member

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    cheers man, i cant seem to find a pencil anywhere so thats part of the reason for the messiness. i just sketched it out with a paint pen then filled it haha.
     
  12. kredyt

    kredyt New Member

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    eriekid it's yours ? realy all projects keep the style!

    regards kredyty crew kredyt
     
  13. gim

    gim Senior Member

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    bump for crits, much love
     
  14. toopski

    toopski Guest

    not bad for a simple just start making ur lines a bit straighter and cleaner and ull have a nice simple flowing
     
  15. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Sake: You're working in the right direction. Work on bar consistency (example: the legs and cross portion on the A and K). Your SAK leans (lmao that gave me a chuckle) to the left while your E stands straight up. It draws away from the flow of the piece.
     
  16. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
    I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono
     
  17. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Tempo: your other style is way better than this mess. The line through the middle just looks bad imo. Work with this style without the bar through the middle and try and get it flowing a little better.
     
  18. knowtheledge

    knowtheledge Senior Member

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  19. spiltink

    spiltink Banned

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    heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

    http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

    looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

    to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_123199693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

    ~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

    o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

    [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG
     
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  20. Fang

    Fang Senior Member

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    Malto what kind of markers do u use??