yellow looks alright lose the lumps off the a though
Don't do fills yet either
Just keep sketching and you'll get it

 

yea fix the A and put some shadow on it maybe

 

thats realy good but im having a hard time figuring out if the first letter is an A or a K

edit: i mean A not K sry

 

your having troubles telling if its an a or an a? what the fuck?
but shit looks good mayne i dont like the lil swoop down in the e tho maybe a swoop up like in the a? but whatever

 

for starters, your name is gay as fuck.
and please stop talking like that
and your letters look like they have hemorrhoids.

 

nice dyin to live

 

crits pleasee.. ill give some in my next post

 

so wheres the crit u jus fukin ripped on meh an my name should have nutin to do with the thrwie. Stop tlikn like fukin wut to? This is a toy fukin forum where toys get crits if ur so god damn good mayb u shouldnt b in this forum.

lyfe nice but it looks like ur y needs a lil work

 

hai

 

nice handy!

 

i think its actually supposed to represent an eyelid coz of the teeth and chin below it but yeh i could be wrong.

Monster- looks good but sort your skinny leg of the m out and theres a little too much going on in that throw.

 

monster- looks okay.. i mean i like it till i look closely.. weird shaped letters but i haven figured out if thats good yet lol
masta- your not shittin me.. the Y is so hard.. i picked the most difficult name

 

i picked the four easiest letters for me and made a name out of it thats how i came up with LiRE

 

see.. with me. i use to write faze.. but almost got caught cause i guess someone snitched.. so i had to change my name.. and somehow came up with lyfe2, cause i was starting over again. i shoulda changed it early.. im not changin it again lol. already got to far with it..

 

I don't think its too late to change your name. Sure you've got up with that name, but it ain't like people are gonna look at those pieces and be like wow.(no offence, im shit too). I doubt anyone wuold notice if you stopped writing it. Your might find you progress quicker with an easier name.

 

thoughts? crits?

 

you know what.. i think your right. but see i want a name no ones got and thats hard to find anymore..

 

if you go to artcrimes.org( i think) they have a list of all there featured artists. When i thought of my name i went on there to see if anyone good had it. If theres a name and there shit then take it and king it.