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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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  2. spher

    spher Senior Member

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    i think after looking at these im more then toy ... :(
     
  3. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    humr that first ones tight except for the R, it looks like down syndrome, and the left extens on the M, and that 3rd flick i dont feel at all
    oats is aight nice and simple, i wouldnt vote for it in a battle though
    hapa- idk what im looking at those skinny bars connecting everything should go away
    kryl- keep practicing i guess, nothing really stands out

    crit me yall, this is going on a prodo on saturday, pics later
    i screwed up the 3d width in some parts, i know
     
  4. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    In my opinion, I think you should cut some negative space in your D and straighten out your T to flow with the rest of your letters. Interesting style though.
     
  5. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    this man wrote WORD lol
     
  6. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    basically what I mean by that is when your looking at a spot and you see what your gonna write in your head, trying to picture it before comming out with the cans, does math come apart of
    what goes in to when your peice.
     
  7. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    What?
     
  8. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    yeah i feel you on the T, i feel like it has to have the bend though for it to flow, but ya it is weird looking, thansk though. i learned i cant really do traditional piecing styles, so imma fuck with this for a while
     
  9. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Just a suggestion for the T maybe, Make it capital and have extensions on both sides coming down from the top bar that curve out. Like on the top of your DEB, when you change directions, the bars flush out so maybe it could make the T more uniform.

    I feel as though I might have fucked up my thought but maybe not lol
     
  10. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    i get what your saying, ill try it on the nex one that sounds tight
     
  11. dest1

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  13. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Just tried some guys name I saw up. K is a little small but the whole thing is kinda small so that's probably why.
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  14. SkateJunt

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  15. EWL24

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    Sol - i like it, but the bottom bar of the E could have been smoother and i would have connected the two parts of the K
    did this yesterday, i dont really like my E or W but i think the rest turned out ok
    crits please
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  16. PETER

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    playing with ideas for an exchange. Just started doodling with a purple paint marker and liked it so I outlined in sharpie.
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  17. freekofart

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  18. SneeZ

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    cant read the first one, and the second one needs more arrows, definitely.
     
  19. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    There is standing Freek on both sketches. But the second one is too hectic.
     
  20. Beko

    Beko Senior Member

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    i kinda like the flares! what do yall think?