the things at the top..notice how the original has one on the S and the and the restof the letters have more than one..the M has 3..and make all ur letters the same size and straight..wat i mean is move with ur letters..i can tell ur stiff and dont move ur body a whole lot while throwin it up..go with ur letters..wen they go down go down with them and move over with them..i like it tho..wouldnt mind seeing that alot more... View attachment 508559
i really don't like how your E has that bubble thing popping out. and make the line on the inside of the L a little shorter because it makes it look kinda like a C
yea i like it better now maybe make the side of the L slightly smaller so it doesn't stick out like a bubble.
yea except now that i look at it make the tops of your letters the same size because they look like a staircase. the bottom is even though
try this. [Broken External Image]:http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/3893543471_474612146d.jpg
here's mine, crits please... says trek [Broken External Image]:http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1012/trek1throw.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo129.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo131-1.jpg been workin on a 2 letter for a new name. Ters Havek- shits not legible at all man, i would say start all over and do much simpler letters
i disagree with that one, i think havek's style is dope. it may look not legible cuz the balpoint pen or wtv but if u use a ny fat cap that shit will be clear. i digg it, thats my opinion. keep it up
View attachment 508754 thinking of going out tommorow critS? zarb- try and make the stem of ur T not so fat havek- havek ur style is unique i just dont feel it
His username is Havek, you dummy. Open your eyes. It's right there for you to look at and spell it right.
Anion- Shut up dude Melo- That one looks alot nicer, maybe add some some of those bumps that you did on the E and L on the O also because the O looks a little plain
I like the T, but it also kind of looks like a penis. Sorry, maybe I am just perverted but it takes away from the style for me lol.