aside from dropping the crazy huge chunk on the top of the K how might I improve these letters?

 

whatchu think?

 

I think you're trying to give me taco neck. Not bad. I suck at throws. the shadow isn't working for me though. I grew up in Marana. where in AZ you from?

 

im chillin in phx right now any suggestions on the shadows ?.............. i tend to screw it up

 

http://www.khulsey.com/perspective-drawing-basics.html start here. I only went to Tempe really... as far a phx area. I miss Tucson bad.

 

thanks man i appreciate it yeah ive been to tuscan its pretty nice up there check out my art on art for sale thread and hit me up with comments im majorin in fine arts right now and i want all the help i can get (pm me if u want .....i leave it up to you)

 

Your canvases are solid. I'll pm you some of mine later see if you wanna trade.

 

i would honestly add some symmetry to that and take the top right arm of the K in the other direction to somewhat mirror the T. and the bottom right leg will mirror the bottom left of the A.

 

For drop shadow just imagine youre tracing the outline of your letters like a half inch to the left. Or right, or any direction that's up to you.

Antik, besides droppin that big ass tumor, I think it would help your K if you made the main back bar a bit more prominent.

crits, comments?

Ignore that hand lol

 

Thanks for the input Vems. I'll play with the K a bit.

 

np homie

 

Any crits for my piece? I want to get better at this.

 

Thanks for the crits bra
Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.

 

rib - those are nice, i really like that P

reposting for crits

 

The aply was a quick freestyle against mn nice, so the letters are kinda random, but yeah the P dont really fit the rest of the style.

On the broke peice the R and K are practically the same, but it adds balance imo, I just should have made a curvier E.

talk about balance... this the rough draft. gonna eat and go to work, prolly redo it tonight. no need to crit

 

trying something new but i think i gotta put the lower part of the s under the curve instead of in front...crits

ribs: i definitely like the idea but I'm not feelin the H

 

sevr. doesnt reach do that e with his throws? and not really feeling the V kinda looks like a y, and for the drop shadow to make sense you need to fill in the hole in the r

 

maybe he does idk i thought it was just a generic e

 

take the nub out of the bottom of the v