Sorry about attachment(at school). i think this one is better than the other and what should i put inside of the letters. (having problems with the letter B) Might do another E is too big.
Mogan i love what your doing. Female - define the letters with dots etc and its an ok starting point.
Female - Try doing straight letters now, with 3d. Monerr- You should definitely do a whole piece with that black/green color scheme. On the bottom one it looks like you went a little big on your M and I think you can make that E look a little bit better
female i think he means like adding random shit inside the letters so u can read them with ease,like this... [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/IMG_0199.jpg some ugly shit i never posted [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3585.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3586.jpg Mone - the colors and cleanliness of the first one are dope,the second one is fresh but the drips would have been better if they were less thick in my opinion,the character is proper ian - the right bar of the n is huge ,should have kept it like the left bar and it would have looked alot more clean ribcage - watch your bar width,dont put your 3d over your letters .... yes - the only one that is pretty decent is the first one but you need to seriously go more simple stop trying to do crazy shit nose - that nova peice is nice and im feeling that brutal peice just not the letter b or the 3d soar - im feeling your throwup,but in my opinion a lowercase 'a' would suit it better..also fix that thing poping out on the left side of ur s,it looks strange
u dont have to bump the pictures there right above your post ...and i think you should do anything YOU like even if people dont agree with it. Give me a minute ima do some throws for you just for kicks [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3600.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3599.jpg the letter 'b' is annoying for throwups i agree...i sujest to take influence ( not bite ) from throwups you like and work your way up from there
@Nose: Word I'm glad youliked the Black fill wit the green outline... I used a light green deco on the out line and a Micron for the fill... I want to do one with a red orange outline rather than a green naw' i mean... Check this one... I like da E
no female i didnt mean dont do it all but dont throw so much crazy shit in there you dont know what the letter is. and you can define what a letter is without throwing swirls and dollar signs in there just by tweaking the structure. just start all the way back at simples and work yer way forward. you were onto something with the last one you did. and Mone i dig the latest shit. thasss what im talkin bout. keep on steppin outside cuz i like what im seein
try some outlines, some handstyles, or some characters. Heres something of mine. not really a toy, but im not a good judge of my own shit for some reason. so ill let you guys be the judge
example- go simple and use bars before trying to that shit.,.. only thing thats "decent" about it is the fill and highlights... lost- START SIMPLE! repost for moar crits...