Dude Gemer you have some awesome skills. Loving those characters dude.

 

^^haha thanx man
heres a freestyle i was doin kinda got off topic with the flow and just said fuck it

 

damn my letters got smaller too :/ fuck it ill keep postin

 

^nicceeeeeee

 

thanks dude

 

Top of my S is awkward, and some of the 3D isn't perfect.. Other than that. Crit it.

 

bring those bastards closer and fix the w

 

gemer - those r sick, im really digging those chars

 

SYN - A whole lot better, those letters look real clean, and solid, keep trying to get the bars the same with, they're a little off in some places - like the K and R look a little small and the S a little big. The heights and spacing are good also. Try messing with connections a little, just don't sacrifice the letters and work on that handie, it'll help with the flow of the piece.

GEMER - I don't like the hook in the G, the first E's straight, the MER could be bigger and the thickness of the last R gets too small. Overall flow is decent but the ending E and R gets pretty plain. The right side of the M gets too small and leans too much to the bottom right.

Norf - work on straights, you don't understand letter structure

NAKE - Try using strong contrasting colors, the ones you used are too close in lightness and darkness which makes the piece illegible.

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SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.

 

Prob. the best advise i have heard on this site, well said SVEZAJEZA

 

Thanks for all the crits guys, I did try to have fun with it a while back. But I was told that I just cant do flairs because of my skill level. But I'll have some fun with it and post another after school.

Also that piece was more for something that I could actually paint. It's a easily paintable piece, which was what I was going for.

 

@gemer sick character dude

 

thanks for the crits dudeess

 

it's actually just toy bait...
he DID say get a base structure... which is what you don't have

 

@r does im likeen it just dont knowabout the o looks kinda like an e but the structrues good im diggen it
@shell 703 thanx man and yours is strait man not real;lt original but structures good and the color come on man get some better maekers

 

And thats what i mean by this thread and you, you talk shit just like every other big headed ego person on here, instead of acually helping people all you do is down them and say some smart shit this whole website is about helping people not talk shit threw a damn keyboard

 

CRITTS! Says HAEC