SHEM- keep it simple and straight, make all your letters the same size and dont worry about fill or background yet. get rid of that long ass tail on the S and get rid of the tail thing on the H and just keep it simple i think it would look 100X better.
ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.
Head-I like the ins but the J n O need to go, try n make all your letters the same size n chill out on those dots on ur highlights. View attachment 513858 Sketching High.. View attachment 513859
'keep it simple..' that all i hear theres no description of exactly what i need to do...keep to simple could mean anything can you be more specific plz
What ever you were high on when you did that top piece, stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.
ra your throw is fine but that simp is out of whack. sico the bottom piece is better but the o on it is oddly shaped joins dont do that heart over your I unless your a girl or its for a girl and that random arrow on the o is terrible. lose it. and make all your letters the same size ive been fuckin around with my new name..... its amazing how you never notice how bad your shit is until you post it...crits?? and i didnt ink any of these becasue im not very satisfied with any of them and this is my new method of sketching. fuck clean lnes for now
Got some ideas from siron his shits pretty dope anyone got crits??? [Broken External Image]:http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/4619/dscf9725e.jpg