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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33

    Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court :). I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.

    Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.
     
  2. Lado

    Lado Senior Member

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    Hey, thanks man! :) To my defense, not that it makes a big deal, it looks sketched because I was working with a colored pencil and I wanted the lines to be darker, so I went back over with them (the end result being pretty sloppy). I appreciate this all and I'll keep working towards a better end product.
     
  3. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    fuck! I couldda sworn I thought that said "3RD"
    there was some dude here a while ago with some cool works and wrote 3RD but he dissapeared, I thought it was you and that he came back haha
    damn, well then I guess that's crit enuff innit :p
     
  4. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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  5. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    Looks like you got a good style, I'd say simplify and lower the tail thing on the s.

    I AM 3RD, I got caught so I can't write it anymore. Now it's Erf cause the letters are similar. It's the same as my old R, that's probably why it looks familiar.
     
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  6. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    hhaah ! well I'll be damned then!
     
  7. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    @Erf: Dope ER connection.
    It looks like Eri, though. make the top of the F more present.
     
  8. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    crits on the first one the second one is like i drew it in a bad trip.
     
  9. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    keep workin on em in ur books, till u get alil more flow
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  10. SneeZ

    SneeZ Senior Member

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    Its bout time, to upload the shit i came up wit. Ok, drop shadows fucked, struggling with n a bit. gotta get the lines cleaner. The bad colors was all i could find.

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    feedback pls.
     
  11. sema

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    youll figure it out just keep it all goin the same way think of where your light sorce would b like on the little splashs it sould be down to the left like the rest of the shadow on the throw also with the round bottoms its easier to drop it down lower to echo the curves better
     
  12. skinaone

    skinaone Elite Member

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    shitty cam pic new throw i kinda like it
     
  13. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    was doodling in class and came up with something similar to this and really like it decided to clean it up a bit. what do you think? do i finally got something halfway decent? DSC00251.jpg
     
  14. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    not to be a DICK but that p just winked at me haha....try to get smoothe lines and dont sketch your throws
     
  15. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    that's much more a simp than a throw.
     
  16. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    throws shoud b smooth single lines.
    no sketching. but the i is cool
    how'd u think of the name?
    i read it nd thot of pedophile
     
  17. bio99

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    I know the proportions could be better but any crits?
     
  18. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    try n do that s in two lines n same with the rest of ur letters. but good start.kill that smiley face tho
     
  19. SynOne

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    Critique.

    Yes I know my e on the 2nd one is fucked up... I messed up and was like... ohh well.
     
  20. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Cut the One out. Just Syn