dam g jus keep feeeding the fire everybody gonna burn you into bbq thotzone good thing I dont eat meat tho
thotz and co. new page = subject change NOW ! all beef, flaming, shit talking, mockery, insults... anything after this post will result in an immediate ban. 3 pages is enough waste for you immature pieces of shit you've been teh warned
PETER- wow thats dope>for a freestyle. i cant freestyle for shit. i always mess up and there just a line in the middle of my letter haha. but props to that
crits please changed the E and colored it in this last one i dont really know what to do with and i hate the L, but i cant think of a L that would fit with this
Ewal, fix your "e" in the last pic, and instead ofthe end of your "a" goin towards your "e", use your "L" instead.
Ewal i like that first one. sure it's not mad fucking crazy and shit but it's smooth and pretty clean. if you can tweak it in a few areas, get some cans and start blasting that shit everywhere.
(went back a few pages before all the bullshit) Thotz- that DRZ piece is way over complicated, if i hadn't read the other posts and the hand i couldn't have known what it said.. i think you had a good idea but didn't really pull it off. try and tine down the extensions and shit. the straight you did is pretty cool though. i like that. and the straight letter on this page is cool aswell Crook- i really don't like the O's... also, take a bit of time when you add ink cause a lot of your lines are really shaky. just try and do each line in a clean, smooth motion. even if it's a straight letter or simple piece, if it's clean and sharp, it will look a lot better. also, K's and R's are great letters to work off of each other, doesn't matter what's in between them. those two letters can make a piece work well. don't exactly mirror them or anything but just bare in mind that the basic structure for them is roughly the same... Naked- with the orange piece, the letters are actually really good. the character, not so much. letters work though. good work. also that black and yellow simps is cool. work with that. not too keen on the purple piece though. also, Jean, i don't think you painted that.. massive apologies for all the talk and no flicks, i'm at work
Yo wassup, this is my first attempt at a 'piece.' I've mainly just been drawing and hitting throwies/tags. It says Phishy, I kinda royally screwed up the P, last H and Y, but I still think that I have progressed. Please give me some input/opinions, thanks.
tophaa: please read the entire "New to Graffiti? Start here" thread please. It will address everything everyone would tell you. Nips: Thanks a lot. Of course I only see the flaws in it, but I like the idea for it. I get a decent one every once in a while.
dont make fun of his speech impediment, hes got dicks in his mouth View attachment 615567 VVVVVVV Ha, you frontin, youve never touched a clit in your life