I like the S, Hammertime but I would lose the bubbles on the top or maybe just, as DirtyDozen said, put it all around the letters. The top mart of the M looks a little wierd to me, maybe make the two top parts of the M equal?

 

quick one becuase im bored. working on making them the same size.

hammertime- work on not having so much dead space going on in the m.

 

etc.. you guys are idiots read what went on before my post.

ie. people using the term dickriding as if it meant insulting.

 

The M seems way too square compared to the S and the P. And boxes don't look good unless the rest of it is relatively boxy, which you won't get with an S like that.

 

Like no flow here. The letters don't flow well, the colors are bad.
Whatevs. Needs work for sure, man.
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fix the J and the K the

J looks like a blob..

K needs the the right leg extended and the right arm..

 

shriiip




i fucking forgot the fucking m in shriiimp lol but i still like it

 

oww that fill makes my eyes bleed..

 

there mother fuckers

 

Thats more of a Peice than it is a throwie. Learn from the other Examples on here.

 

sorry i didnt want to put it in the pieces cause its on paper next time i will

 

and biting character off that youtubes guy is fucking dumb , coz everyone has seen it. and u cant even redraw it normal looks like your hand is shaking like a fuck.

 

im going to have to disagree with you about my throwie there lol, ive been practicing my handstyle alot for the last month, i just started practicing my throwies two days ago and it looks like shit in my opinion haha

 

did you do that in a textbook which you will have to return with your name on it?

also, looks sick, keep it up

 

Well then I guess I ment your handy is good, my bad

 

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ok i haven't painted in a year and this is what came from it as of today so crits??

 

go ways simpler. take off that orange background, focus on the letters, not colors, addons, etc.

 

i know like i got my drawings down pretty good but i just cant do this shit anymore i mean it wasn't good before but now its just shitty as hell...