May I say, that was quite original indeed. I really liked the part when you said "shut up," it left me with chills. I'll take your request into consideration and come back to you when I give a fuck. Stop whining, he broke some ethical rules, but guess what this is the FUCKING INTERNET. In case you didn't realize, everything you post can be copied, tracked and even sold unless you have a shit load of money, a copyright and a good lawyer. If you can't get over that fact, you shouldn't be on any forums, or writing graffiti for that matter.

 

yo give axil a break! we're all friends here.
isn't it enough that his piano's off tune at places?
it's cool with me man, post all the flicks you want online. as long as they're good and they're on my fb page already haha

 

Cred: Personally I think it's working. Only thing I'm not liking is the C and C/R connection. Maybe just move the top right of the C up a little. I'm diggin it. The D is dope. Maybe cut the extention of the back of the D and do something with the bottom of the E like the right side of the D.

 

i'll remove the video for all of those that are crying about it

 

@Peter thanks man, I'll try that

Fixed up the last one.

 

REALLY feeling that sketch man, nice steez. Only thing im not a huge fan of is the "foot" of the E if you know what i mean. Maybe just a little tweak

 

Besides the S being to far from the O and E, and the middle of the E being weird what's wrong.

 

uknowigetup- i know what the internet is you grimey douche, if anyone shouldn't be writing it should be you...

and hell, if its was someone else... almost anyone else... making a video of actual good shit, on an actual GOOD youtube channel, id dig.. but this shit.... hellllll no.

 

um.... use a new paper?

 

SOL,
In the above piece, I would work on getting the S and the E balanced out. See how the top portion of your E, is curved, and the top portion of your S is bar-d out. Work on bringing down to S a little bit. Mostly just generally try to get the S and the E the same style, and balanced. If you kept the bottom part of that E, and worked on the bottom left bar of the S, you could get those to look balanced/symmetrical. nomsaying?

 

can some1 crit my throwies in the throwies section "))

 

Once again with the clever comebacks man. It must be easy to argue when you use said formula;
[Insert profanity and other vulgar terminology (it'll scare people and not make you look unintelligent at all!)] Then simply [Insert an insult your opponent just used and send it right back at them! (this is an intense scare tactic, BE CAREFUL WHEN YOU USE It, it won't make you appear illogical in the slightest.)]

 

Looking a lot better man. Have you experimented with dropping the E down, and removing the back extension on the D? If you could make the bottom of the e, or the lower leg symmetrical and balanced with the R it would look more amazing. Just a suggestion, it looks really good as is. Loving the flow, the back of the D/what the E sits on is the only thing that pops out as odd to me.

 

im glad you've formulated my plan to scare little kids on the internet. maybe you can go do it on other forums and think you are cool

also, don't double post and quote a photo in the same page, it makes YOU look unintelligent , and don't give crits cause you suck nuts.

 

I better have been in that video

 

Haha Naked...and fuck you nine I didn't have any other paper.

 

Thanks for the crits guys. Should I just try to go more simple? I also tried to make my letters look more different from each other, whadya think?

 

What do you guys think about these? Criticize my shit hard, it helps

 

3rd has most potential, fatten the K bars and make em str8 not kinked