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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    tace the hole in the a in the throw is too small
     
  2. Ronathon

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  5. NouveauP

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    I liked it better inverted. The fill still sucks, but I'd like some crits on my outline more than the fill.

    Kane- I'm digging your throws. And I like the A in your straight letter, but the rest isn't working for me.
    ai357.photobucket.com_albums_oo20_NouveauP_battle041.jpg
     
  6. Stigma02

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    u know a j points the other way right? haha ronathon that is legit as fuck haha, nouvea maybe work on making the outline cleaner?
    Tace i like #2 on the 3d one try to put more detail in the 3d like lines come from the letters instead of a huge block
     
  7. -Dank-DK-

    -Dank-DK- Elite Member

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    ai36.tinypic.com_rwo4kk.jpg

    new name just a simp
     
  8. Animal

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  9. PREA672

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    do you write animal?
     
  10. Ronathon

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  11. Sbal

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    the u looks like a w
     
  12. Ronathon

    Ronathon Senior Member

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    Hmm. I see what you mean.
    I should have put it closer to the B so the link wasnt so wide.
    Poo!
     
  13. RaveCat

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    Tace: I like the 3rd one, myb if u did it thicker and in some ill 3D instead of the point perspective thing? 2nd one's nice.
    Dank: Nice one, colors are awesome
    Ronathon: Like your stuff
     
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  14. ChadOne

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  15. Stigma02

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    an exchange battle i did with romik crits?
    ai75.photobucket.com_albums_i309_bobthecow173_Picture677.jpg
    i know its a lil dirty and u can see pencil but crit everything but that haha
     
  16. Willis1989

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    Can I pls have some crits on these, started going more simple.

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_DSC00266.jpg_d627873b30a665f03b063a02e4298b80.jpg

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_DSC00264_1.jpg_d627873b30a665f03b063a02e4298b80.jpg
     
  17. Ronathon

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    Give crits to get crits
     
  18. NosE2

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  19. 775SakE

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  20. ChadOne

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    Sake - I like that background on the first one, but you should try to keep all the bars the same width and space out the K and E more cuz they are kinda hard to read.