the fog one's the only good thing you've got. start from there and move up. dont worry about style yet..

 

Any crits?

 

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vex try it with some style I guess, youre consistent with bar widths (except in the V kinda) so I guess go in

 

ecok^

that was your crit

 

ehh i see it I guess, gotta work out proportions better

or maybe i should change my name to E.at COcK

 

Or you could pick a good word lol

 

crits?

 

Thanks Phat, i'm gonna keep practicing on paper.

 

just came back from a 2 year break and this was the throw i was rocking when i stopped. worth painting or should i scrap it?

 

id say scrap it, find somethin with more style.
nowwwww criticize, constructively!

 

scrap it, or at least fill it in or something.

 

Just some pen stuff

Untitled by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

scrap it completely. the points on the bottom leave too much blank space, the lines and the giant holes make it look more toy than it might actually be, and the letter structure isn't all quite there.

 

Any crits pleasee ??

 

tell me what u think.

 

I dont really know what to tell you !! But im sure someone here knows !

 

just give me advice guy! i dont care how nice or shitty it looks, ive been doing this throwie for a year now. maybe i should change the P and the C, idk really what to do.

 

You should change the s the c the a and the p

 

And do more simple stuff