HERTS - I like it, maybe make it go straighter. and like you said, put dots in the letters that have em. And make the top of the T less round. And the E doesn't look like an E. MANR - Keep the style of each letter more uniform and have them more flush with eachother. View attachment 397267
BigBlue- Needs more style smooth_nuts - i like the first one more what ive been putting up lately [Broken External Image]:http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6603/phone0007ma8.jpg
It's not a bite you fruitcake, I just tried angling my throwie a little like his and Seens and others etc.. . I didn't realise using an angle was biting. Look. Although I'll be the first to admit that with an angle it looks too much like his to be usable though. I guess because the letters are a similar simple rounded style.
BigBlue - Add more detail, like that guy said, R and N look like blobs. Cool style though. ASIC - try making the I more visable, looking pretty decent. Bumpin my shit. Usually the right leg of the N extends higher tolook like a propper upper case N. View attachment 397382
nince- fresh as always near - i think that has very good potential..id work on the n a little bit..doesnt flow like the other letters early stages of a style im workin with..'