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lmao. thanks for the crits

 

Help.

 

Just work on your letters first before you try adding anything else in.

 

first one is pimp i like the M its got flow. the second and third arent that bad but
its still getting flowy. word.
meow

 

My first ever throw up

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ohh shit i didnt know ewok posted in here

 

that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
...noice

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random throwie. the u is a fatty haha

 

That throwie would look official on a wall if the U had the same proportions as the other letters.

 

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how wonderfully generic...the A needs work and the middle connection of the M too....apart from that its alright...add some special get rekt steez to it and make sure all the bottom parts of the throw are in proportion (aka the same size) aswell and it would be a banger

 

skam were u from thunderbay? if so hit me up

 

Feedback ~

 

Practice on paper before you go smearing poop on walls.

 

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trying a new e maybe

 

it doesn't flow with the rest

 

random bombs
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well, heres a throwie i just did...
keepin it simples..

oh yes, crits please.

 

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