anyways...on my doodle. What do you recommend instead of the looping through letters..I personally like that style.
that engine actually, noob.... and if u said they painted them TOGETHER, ur even more wrong... on another note fuck u graff nerds get the fuck off the internet
Vice, I'm toy as hell, but it looks like you tagged over a piece that was a shit ton better than your bunny throw. You can halfway see it through your sloppy fill. Just saying, I wouldn't do it. Maybe you got beef with the crew or something, I dunno... good way to get jumped and deserve it. Nothing against you though, especially if they pieced something gay over your stuff.
Your N looks like a V. clean it up and don't have lines crossing eachother, make one side over another covering it up.
Hipe-You forgot the shadow on the hump of the P. Second, that curvy shit you keep doing to your letters just makes it look like shit. It makes them really uneven and it's like I'm drunk looking at it. Shot-Read what I said on the bomb thread. Ughhh...
ok you said you dont see whats wrong with this? first take a look at that triple glow or whatever the fuck you did. you just need one line for a glow. next....overlapping isnt a bad thing to do, but here you took it a little too far. you only really see a "o" and "n" at first glance, try to make it more legible. and this is more of a straight letter style, not a throwie. throwies are bubble letters you know, keep it up though you have potential
Thanks bro. Thats exactly what I wanted.. I know im not good at this point. But having someone give me tips is much appreciated.
stop using chisel markers or keep everything one thickness. and the thing on the bottom left of your H is unecessary and tweak the E.
Shot, the first one would look decent if you just did a 1 color fill, even though your letter thickness is madddd off in a lot of places, and why do you have a curved center for your o when its a straight letter...... The second one, fuck man, your t looks like an R and your O is in the wrong place, way too much overlapping, your transitions need to be on every letter or no letters, your letters need to be the same size, letter thickness is still off a bit. Your 3d is off, and you look like you wanted to do a transition on the O and T but you fucked it up by putting a line through it. Either add a transition, or make the 3d go over the T. You posted in the wrong forum btw.