aciddemos - It looks okay not huge the piece, but dope character. smooth nuts - I dislike the ok, but the other throwie is good but the fill is to scratchy imo. (Fill it in more) Bump, I never did get any crits on this so hit me up !
Bump for maximum whoreage. View attachment 481869 And I'm sorry dude, this is probably the weirdest letter combo I've ever had to deal with. Looks like total shit....
ILikePie- not feeling the seyar (i think thats what it says) one, but the rasr ones good. idk, i kind of wish i got to see you put effort into a piece and have it not be like half colored and messy, you could definitely pull out some tight shit smooth nuts- im a fan of your throw up style. idk about the K and A in the OKAE ones, but i definitely think the other two-letter OK throws are legit. Plus the 'DOPE' stuff is on point as always acid demos- great pen work. no crits needed. keep busting them out KnoxIn- its cool that youre so devoted to learning this style, but you're mostly thinking about making the letters look aesthetically pleasing, and not completely thinking about making them still look like words. try to keep away from putting letters in weird positions that make them lose their definition; for instance, the CJM one is hot up until the M, and then personally i wouldnt have known that was an M. keep up the progress though Bump, needing lots of criticism lately
haha yoo sorry wings, kind of did skip over ya Its already a do-able throw, but if you want to make it better i'd say try to make the letters look a little more similar to eachother. The bumps on the bottom of each letter do that, but the top everythings different, try to clean that up and it'll look fresh. not too much else id say for you to change though
Not really dude, I need to get back into my groove. I keep on taking hella long breaks from even sketching I'll get back to you once I'm back in the swing of things though.
[Broken External Image]:http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/8066/p5313370.jpg doesn't say anything i know the light part of the letters looks a little weird... any advice on how to shade or whatever and get it all even? ^^ scratch i didnt' read what you said ill remember that though scratch- i like them they are both damn clean love your fills seyar-like your top ones
^ my advice to you is look how geometrics are shaded realistically, like look at a cube like object and draw the shading on that you know? then apply it to the graff. that how i do pretty much with my biro shit dont see why it wouldnt work on this style
you can actually crit this one if you'd like and I will consider what you have to say... too me... I think every individual letter is okay at best... but they seem like they just dont fit together... I don't know... this is like my first sketch in ... I dont know heh... Whatever... have at it... View attachment 482029
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