oh yeh i see that line, just after u draw each letter, look at your letters already on the paper and make sure that your bars and everything are the same as your other letters, take ur time with it dont rush it, np dude keep it up
6i90 - make ur letters not touch at all for now, space them out equally, and make enery letter the same size, you obviously spend a decent amount of time drawing, but if you dont listen to people on here and what they say you wont get much better. I see improvement form your first posts but still lacking. Make your letters S P A C E D out, pick a work, type it on your screen and draw what you see. Dies - probs same crits for you, same size and width TBS - not bad not really feeling the A tho. Shade - not bad, keep at it, make bars on D a little thicker. But thats probs the best simp on the page as a starting point I havent had much time this week to draw, but ive got these three shitters for crits if anyone has any
Sketch battle entry. I don't have any markers at the moment, so I had to pencil the shades, which the scanner hardly picked up.
You're right, although I usually don't do it as much as I did here. I started out too big and didn't want to go to a second paper. But point taken.
Kidd, i like the simplicity of that piece, maybe take the extension on the top of the K in a bit. looks a bit too big imo. Swank, as said, space your letters out a bit more. also there's quite a few unnecessary extensions there. maybe cut back a bit. couple exchanges and some script. crits would be nice. View attachment 79612 View attachment 79617
6i9o - much better thats the way to go, just keep doing bars like that and youll progress. Wiz - Like the deadmau5 kinda character on first piece, not huge fan of the letters but not bad, the second piece is better imo