Snore - diggin that throwy take - looks dope [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3266-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3264.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3259.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3263.jpg
take- the one with red bubbles is ok, the one with blue bubbles ur trying too hard and it just looks bad, i just dont like changing styles for each letter... the last one is good though, the gray just makes it look sloppy, use a bright color for the outline... gumonshoe- it looks real nice, dope throw, but i thought of somethin to make the S match the O and E a little more, try somethin like this maybe? (but cleaner of course) tofe that top one is ur best bet... just watch which bars are straight and which are curved... a few places one side of the bar is curved and the other is straight and that never looks right, u can mix the 2 (curves and straight) but not on the same bar u feel what im sayin?
gum-for some reason when i read that the first time i dont think "the second one" came up or i just had a retarded moment...i was just way to confused for something so little
its easy... im bored so ill take the time and explain hah... i circled a few spots where the bars just dont match up from one side to the other, and thats why the piece is lacking as a whole u know what i mean? when a line goes a certain direction then it only looks right if the other line on the opposite side of the bar is going in the exact direction (or at a defined, constant angle).... when it all matches up ur shit will look way better mayn... if u look at the second pic u posted the bottom of the O is a prime example....
my socks and cakies are once again in a photo lol. re outheres another. I reoutlined the one in yellow and it looks cleaner. Ill post it up a bit later
i also just noticed that your A kinda looks like an M...put a hole in it to make it look like an A more
View attachment 556467 View attachment 556468 View attachment 556469 Crits: To me: I'm iffy on the S bc of the extension on the bottom. The arrow is kinda big and the double extensions off that bar im not really feeling and they seem unnessary Icon: Bars, not triangles. Freak: That throw is busted. Go simpler. Take: Just watch your bars but most of your shit is not half bad. ZOOKYORK KNOWS HOW TO GIVE CRITS!
you can bite all you want bro, no anger here. but sure, PM me what you write, or if you're comfortable with posting it here, do so. Edit: OH nevermind, i already saw what you write. ok, i'll do take. hook me up with an Ikue. Edit#2: Ok, so i orginally was gonna' make the Top of the the T higher, cause it's short. sadly however, it didn't come out that way, and this green crayola marker i found on the floor on the street is almost dead, so i didn't want to use up more ink cause i like the dry effect this crayola marker gives... [Broken External Image]:http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo39.jpg
aight ima do a straight and post it in the exchange thread and I'll pm it to ya. I want a throwie though those are fresh edit: aight thanks bro heres yours The trowie and hand suck but w/e
View attachment 556562 a combination of a throw,straight and piece. Tried to give it that progressive feel if you know what I mean. crits