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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    Tasty - i agree with rib your stuff always looks the same. ur good enough to try some new things
    Rib - those are so sick, the only thing i would change is that the R kinda looks like a B
     
  2. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    thanks for the proper crits bro.
    for that, here you go
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  3. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    thats all I get? Somebody isnt getting anymore crits...
     
  4. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Beach


    A and C looks dope
     
  5. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    lol its an ill B, and an ill R.
     
  6. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    alright i'll give some crits hahah. your E and A are dope as hell, the top of the C seems awkward to me idk, and that H is kinda hurting i suggest making the extensions all pop off to one direction, rather than that one you have going towards the A.
    all i got for now.
     
  7. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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  8. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Diggin your stuff Soar. You're really getting a good handle on your style. Unlike me haha

    Sol, keep working on your letters. And theres too much of a kink in the bottom bar of your L, looks like it'd be for a W.

    crits please

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  9. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    @ribcage thanks i wasn't sure if it would go into either Blackbook or Throwies
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    Would this fit more into the blackbooks?
    SelfCrits: Shadow is off, letters are uneven, Bars are uneven.
     
  10. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    that's funny coming from someone whose handies look like a 5-year-old kid in special ed did them.
     
  11. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    My handies look like that? LMAO!:(
     
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  12. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    I do like the style on your handies Reach. and Aeso two pages back, that sketch if fucking ill. Although the A has way too much negative space at the bottom of it, and the S just looks awkward. I think you should've made the middle of it come up more and changed the bottom a bit. And MN Nice I realize the L is fucked up haha, sometimes I can get it right, sometimes. I'm working on it dude, just gotta keep moving forward. Thanks though.

    Just some shit I did in math
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    You have no idea how fucking small that is haha
     
  13. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    props on the second to last one and the first one. i'll give it to you, you're pretty good, but you don't need to talk shit and act like king of the forum 24/7 regardless.
     
  14. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    I aint on here lookin for your approval, and I dont need/want your props. What you quoted at the top of this page was the truth, I wasnt trying to blatantly talk shit to you to just talk shit you. I said it because you went out of your way to talk shit to someone else without posting a pic when your just as bad. I dont want or think im "king of forum" if you think that, then thats your problem, and you shouldnt be trippin at all.

    Wheres all the hostility coming from? Wasnt I nice to you? Didnt I try to help you? Lol its funny that you tried to insult my hands before trying to insult me for being a post whore, you should know better.
     
  15. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    ^^this.
    and by the way your handies are tight bro.

    and shit outa luck, i garuntee everyone in this forum is getting tired of hearing this but go simple and drop the connections and extensions for now, at least until you get proper structure and flow in your work.
     
  16. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Crits? Nobody? Thats cool dudes.
     
  17. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    I was about to say: maybe make the O a little wider, especially at the top. I am diggin it atm.
     
  18. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    shit outa luck- i gave you crits hahahah check my post
     
  19. emace1

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  20. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    bumpin this