Overall this is pretty banging. The last letter is an E? Unless I am mistaken? Make it look more like it. Just add something to bring it out. One solid line, from what I see. Digging it. Completely. That S had me having whiplash.. LOL. @Slayer.. On some real shit, no diss.. Can you tell me what you're trying to write there.. I see an O.. some other letters. And whatever else. Just saying.. No hate.
Bottom pg bump. Stuck- I like the bottom one...I think I cant really see it Coser- I would say stay away from colors and just work on structure. I would say the R is the worst but none of them are really piece worthy. keep at it just not with any colors.
Syde - looks pretty good i would just thin out the E a bit and maybe make the S bar a little thicker Monix - that second simples cool i like it. just work it a little make it yours Coser - Style and colors Stuck - Second piece on first page is phire! is it not finished? i see the O
Diggin it stuck, a little cramped for my taste but its nice. Morgan that is nearing fire, minus the e, it just dont belong there. Try rockin an upper case like stuck till you find something that works.
thepenkins -extension on top of r looks off, and the leg doesnt look right either, the pink is hot tho dubbed - x's are a bitch, keep working tho. on the 2nd piece the extension on top of the n ruins the symmettry stuck - its a bit cramped, fills are nice. the shading on the inner part of the e on cassie looks incomplete, i dunno if thats just me. mogan - the e has go to go, its slant is different from the other letters
LOLOLOLOLOLOL This is my old shit! hahahahahahahaha 07 days! this is fucking awful compared to what im doing now. Damn can't believe I thought that shit was fly!
Ok so I just started about 1 month ago and I would really like some feedback. First of all I'm sorry for the image size, but I don't know how to change it. the first image is my first try the second one is my first character Maj. Values(major values) he represents the values that are dear to me. the third one is a stencil I made using photoshop the last one, is something I made a longtime ago when I was bored in class and I was Rat instead of Ratto.
Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the M sideways would definitely go good with the style...
use photobucket.com to upload your photos And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum. Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way: E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can. MOGAN! PLEASE READ! what markers do you use? I'm in the market for some new ones, please share =3
Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the M sideways would definitely go good with the style...
Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght