make the 2 o's some titties !!!

gophe - I like the different styles try flippin that onliner man like a line coming off the top from 1 letter then the next letter have it coming off the bottom alternating the lines .... just an idea

 

kroe the top pictures are cool, just clean them up a bit and change up the R, maybe try experimenting with some other oneliner methods too. i really like the E in the bottom picture

spy you should change up the first letter

kopr that looks dope, i dig that fat S

 

i like fat asses too

 

^ haha yeehh fat asses r the shit. your sig is funny as fuck btw lol

 

first throwie ever, any crits would be appreciated

 

loose the face and shines for now, do it in a marker so we can see it better, does it say soak? is that ment to be an O?

 

Fake/Kush man, you are getting alot better. My only crit would be NOT to listen to these crits here bro. keep it the way it is.. Nice job bro. Keep getting up!

 

where do you see O? lol it says SPAK and whats wrong with the face

 

I think what he's saying is the bottom right leg of the K kinda looks like an O?

 

yeah i give you that, but it's a K and k have those 4 legs and the face has nothing to do with it, just added it there fo fun

 

@Kopr I'll try out some funky shit, i just wanna get a clean simple one liner out first before i add any style to it cos one liners arent my strong suit at all, and that V is dope, and the S too
@Kaze thanks for the crit, i always do my oneliners too quick then freeze up when I get to the R and rush out some wack shit, I'll work on what you said tho
@Spak having faces on your letters doesnt help the style when youre just starting out, maybe when you have decent letters down you can try putting a face on something(prolly not though, idk..)but that P could be confused with an O, it doesnt stick out enough, make it visibly a P, stick that loop out and mke that P your bitch so it cant be mixed up

 

yo guys what do you think?

 

@mr zorak

Don't do the pointed bottom or the highlight thing

 

Crits? I got that b looking better and fuck titties for o's lol I aint getting a shit ton of pink paint.

 

spy, just keep working on simples and separating your letters, maybe use circles on O's instead of dots

 

Corak - I Sent you a private message

What do you think i know messed up on the R leg

 

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whatcha think?

 

no..
it only takes a month or so or even less time to get a solid throw down if you actually try.
its all uneven and wobbly n shit and a million little lines n points.

also go bigger, throws and simps are supposed to be big.. you coulda murked that whole crate with a fat throw.

 

Corak Remove the highlights look how much better it looks