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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    Post moar pix pl0x
     
  2. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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  4. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    Slek: I'd say that you have the whole "keeping proportionate bars" portion of simples down. However, you've got no flow on the sketches I've seen from you. As I've said before, you've got all of the designs and colors down, and that's all fine and good, but the letters are what matter the most. Keep away from those awkward bends and work on developing a relative flow between your letters.
    Crust: Lovin' your characs dude. Nice work.
    Asper: I think you're onto something with the top sketch, but watch the sizes of your letters- looks like they get smaller as they go. As far as the bottom one goes, I'd avoid connecting your letters like that for now.

    And it's been forever since I've posted sketches, but I've been practicing on girls' names on Facebook, so might as well post 'em up, huh? Comments are appreciated as always...
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    Oh, and preach Crust!! Lol, I agree, this thread has become WAY too inexperienced. Get better people!
     
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  5. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Yo

    Those are some dope ass characters in your sketch bro! I like how they all want a piece of that mic and dude is givin' them a chance to rock :p
     
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  6. bzerkyetii

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    the j needs some work
    came up with it in about 3 minutes
    really diggin the c
    crits
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  7. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    that says jog and stop cutting off your letters
     
  8. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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  9. IllLogic

    IllLogic Senior Member

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    my favorite of all the others you posted ^


    i like the s im not really feelin the y tho
     
  10. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Not bad

    The letters I like the most are the T and the A all the other letters are hurrting... I agree the Y is really off and does not fit. The R need more shape and structure because you got that bitch looking like a awkward A lol... I also noticed your shadow is off. Try making all the edges going one way or even picture a vanishing point. It should maake it look a lot cleaner bro trust me.
    I can see that you are working with a permanent marker, I would suggest a pencil first.
     
  11. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    yeah thats probably the worst S ive ever done haha. im sketching in pencil and outlining later, for visibility. but overall thanks for the crit,
     
  12. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    I'm not good at piecing but I'm learning haha

    and that s is the best letter in that piece

    B squared your shits dope
     
  13. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    E kinda looks like a C,

    fixed it up, crits? ai42.tinypic.com_2mxinow.jpg
     
  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Yo man what kind of medium are you using? because what ever i is it is not working for you bro... I think you should avoid those wack paint markers for now and focus on getting your letters to look better... Just use pencils and some ball point pens... You should try to practice your name as much as you can.. But also try practicing to write a lot of other random words... it will help a lot... Think small first then when you got that down go big... Again I like that T because it has a cool style to it...
     
  15. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Oh I forgot

    That S" looks alright just take your time.
     
  16. hpir

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  17. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    yeah mogan i think im just gonna stick with pen and pencil just do it dark, cause the markers always fuck up the lines when i do it, legit before i outline it it always looks crisp as fuck and the markers just wreck it. its just a regular Blackbook page btw.
     
  18. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Crust I'm feeling those faces.
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  19. chikkenbone

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    skwint-that N is steazyyy
     
  20. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    hpir: If that says Kane, it's lookin' pretty good from what I can tell. Lets see some color.
    Skwint: Lookin' fresh man. My only complaint on this one is that bar floating in the middle of the W, just doesn't really fit too well, imo. Aside from that, that's a real nice simp though.

    Aaaannndd another sketch for a chick on FB lol. It's how I'm gettin' in my practice, so whatevs lol. Crits/ comments appreciated.
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