grat- you may want to try a little simpler stuff cuz I can hardly read that. but thats just my opinion. shuk- I agree, straiten out that U and the one part of the K and it'll look good. capo- you may want to try something a little bit different with the top of the A. thanks mass appeal. you think this is better or worse? [Broken External Image]:http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2931/gysesx5.th.png
I might as well try my luck in here. Not sure if it counts as a throw though. I'm going to try and find a better one that's a little more proportioned and I used a cheap orange marker that happened to just be sitting there, possibly for days, drying out. But, you get the idea.
My first ever sketch of a possible throwie: [Broken External Image]:http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/1548/throwupjk3.th.jpg
Just starting out looking for crits. I know its shitty but i need to hear it. The R and the E are terrible
what are u guys looking for? thats hot, or fuck thats so ill. well, it takes work, this shit is not something u can get in a month, shit theres guys writing for like 4 years and still aint got shit down. something can be simple and still have shitty structure. i dont know how to explane it but your lines just look awkward, like they dont belong. keep working.
Please excuse me if I read your names wrong. Shuk-I agree just fix up that u and maybe the k and its dope. Sorz-Try making all the letters the same size. So the S is the same as the Z. Reson-All I can really say is look for the thread about simples and do them until your fingers bleed. Not just simple letters do them like they are on your keyboard. Not really in the best position to give crits but, it's just my first thoughts at a glance.
exchange with sare [Broken External Image]:http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/esfootwear20/sareexchange.jpg
zest, try block simples... dont try run before you can walk... it looks sloppy, like you put no effort into it. no offense meant.
[Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9035/picture198ce7.jpg did this on the train yesterday so it came out a little shaky crits would be nice