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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    loose the blue around it, aswell as the patches in the bottom of your letters.
     
  2. grat

    grat New Member

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    constructive critisism please
     
  3. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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    grat the g and t look good but use bars for the r and a but deff has some potential keep at it
     
  4. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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  5. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    grat- you may want to try a little simpler stuff cuz I can hardly read that. but thats just my opinion.
    shuk- I agree, straiten out that U and the one part of the K and it'll look good.
    capo- you may want to try something a little bit different with the top of the A.

    thanks mass appeal. you think this is better or worse?
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  6. aesopjux

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  7. GEIN

    GEIN New Member

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    I might as well try my luck in here.
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    Not sure if it counts as a throw though.

    I'm going to try and find a better one that's a little more proportioned and I used a cheap orange marker that happened to just be sitting there, possibly for days, drying out. But, you get the idea.
     
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  8. Blorbis

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  9. Reson.

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    Just starting out looking for crits. I know its shitty but i need to hear it
     

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  10. Reson.

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    Just starting out looking for crits. I know its shitty but i need to hear it. The R and the E are terrible
     
  11. J-CHICKEN!

    J-CHICKEN! Member

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    keep it simple, try doing like normal block letters to start off
     
  12. J-CHICKEN!

    J-CHICKEN! Member

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    critz?
     

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  13. Reson.

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    OK i kept it rly simple here. Crits please
     

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  14. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    what are u guys looking for? thats hot, or fuck thats so ill. well, it takes work, this shit is not something u can get in a month, shit theres guys writing for like 4 years and still aint got shit down. something can be simple and still have shitty structure. i dont know how to explane it but your lines just look awkward, like they dont belong. keep working.
     
  15. GEIN

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    Please excuse me if I read your names wrong.

    Shuk-I agree just fix up that u and maybe the k and its dope.

    Sorz-Try making all the letters the same size. So the S is the same as the Z.

    Reson-All I can really say is look for the thread about simples and do them until your fingers bleed. Not just simple letters do them like they are on your keyboard.

    Not really in the best position to give crits but, it's just my first thoughts at a glance.
     
  16. Shoook

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  17. ADUB510

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    good bad really bad what do you guys think ai2.photobucket.com_albums_y25_adub510_DSC00135.jpg
     
  18. ADUB510

    ADUB510 Senior Member

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    good bad really bad what do you guys think ai2.photobucket.com_albums_y25_adub510_DSC00135.jpg
     
  19. globule08

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    zest, try block simples... dont try run before you can walk...
    it looks sloppy, like you put no effort into it. no offense meant.
     
  20. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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