first throw I've come up with I like. Crits. I know the lines are shakey, but it's the first time I did a fill and outline of it and I have chugged a shit load of coffee this morning.
what does it say but the shakey ass lines dont look that bad but your keeping it nice and simple,im feeling the K if it even is a K
I will. what is horrible is out of all my attempts over the years... mind you it's been many since I have tried... this is probly my best throw to date. I've never really much cared for them and have always been shit at them so I've never really given it much effort. Lately I've seen several that have given me motivation to build one of my own.
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The HA connect looks pretty sick even though they aren't too proportional. Just seems to work here. I like the idea of the backwards P. Give your H a back to lean on, but I don't think you pulled it off well enough here. Mostly the indention in the top, I think. Just round it out. I'd avoid using a lowercase t in a throw. It's just a really awkward structure and I think a capital T would be more effective. The 2 isn't too bad. PETER - study some throws homie. Thats lookin rough. And try just drawing simple shapes for a while like circles squares and triangles, but try to draw them proportionally and CLEAN. Maybe try to exhale as you move you hand. Try drawing with your elbow rather than your wrists. These may not necessarily work, but just try to find what works for you.
Peter- looks like you were having a heart attack while doing those lines. work on cleanliness. and the I looks like a C. maybe make them a lil talller Phat2- idk how i feel about the backwards P. i usually like backwards letters but not feelin it as much on this one. not saying you cant make it look better. and the h looks a lil like an L. diggin that A. definitely make the T capital. maybe have the P bump out more at the top rather than sag down. idk
Trying to get down one throw, not change it completely. So I'm taking the crits and applying it to the throw.
@syn Change it, try a new style cause that sure aint working crits changed it a bit smaller gaps streched out letters i think its ight
Your N looks like an H an your A looks A LOT like an R. Like if your user name wasn't skina I'd think that said skihr.
For real, you don't see it? The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be
i see the N being and H but the A being an R not so much but ill fix it up a bit @ reach SHITS AWESOME but the P fix it up a bit AND BTW i finished the simple peice were should i post it up ?