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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. KehmONE

    KehmONE Senior Member

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    Haha, Hops. I've been playing with that name for a while, it's fun to write.
     
  2. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    yeah i see what you mean about the E, the top part is too chunky and the bottom doesnt flow enough so it sticks out like a sore thumb, my E's have improved since that piece though
     
  3. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    i know the 3d and the streaks are fuked up and that i shouldnt have had the E so close to the S on the bottom one. and the tags r sloppy.
    Any crits would be really appreciated.
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    Kroe- the E still worked but could have gone better too, how long have u been writing for? you got really dope stuff
     
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  4. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    Photo0096.jpg pretty happy about this one. need to work on matching the es to the rest
     
  5. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Nice job ^

    Work in progress. The pics gonna be big, posting off my phone. Too drunk to fuck with it tonight.

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  6. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    dug up these oldies from back when i was fuckin with that death metal logo type of lettering
    both say Circle Nine
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  7. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Bumping
     
  8. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    i dig what you did with the coloring, came out fresh, kinda got a little wonky in the bottom of the S and the Y though
     
  9. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    I keep running out of space on my page forcing my letters to be retarded shit is embarrassing
     
  10. pover

    pover Senior Member

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    Don't you have more pages?
     
  11. 6i9o

    6i9o Senior Member

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    The image seems too left-weighted for me. I like the right side tho
     
  12. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    bottom bage bumpin!
     
  13. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    havent had internet inawile .. lil flick .
    will post more when i get internet hooked up
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    Untitled by centrysams, on Flickr
     
  14. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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  15. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    It's good to see you breaking out of that letter lock. Keep it up ^

    And good shit humor!
     
  16. ComradeR

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    @Kroe that is pretty cool, I'm diggin that second one i got a friend of mine that does the same style, she mostly does stencils of some metal bands like venom and exodus.
    @Dempo, get one of them huge ass sketchbooks lol
    @MN I dig the coloring as well, the S seems like it needs a little space tho
    @Centy, that is badass, the characters arms are a bit weird but still pretty fucken dope
     
  17. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    could i plz get some crits on this cocksucker

    4eyes-that middle letter 3d thing you got going there is cool, it looks pretty spot on...i like how u mixed the blue and green too to give it that affect.

    dempo- im not digging that one too much, the first A seems to big and i dont like that R you have there and the J looks kinda weird, i looks like u tryed mixing a throwie with a burner/straight letter. i like ur other stuff more

    humor- that looks cool, cant really give u any good crits though cuz that picture shits on my stuff lol...one thing i could say is maybe dont have the H and M bottom legs intermingled so much and shit like cross over so harshly but its part of the style i guess.

    Sense- thats clean, maybe u should add some shit int he green background, letters and 3d seem to be good though, the 3d on the last E seems kinda off but maybe thats jusit me
     
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  18. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    @Kaze that D is a bit too thick n chunky and im not feelin the way you plop your bars on top of each other on the R try having them overlap, its kinda hard to explain ill draw it out if you want though, and ive been writing for around 7 years
     
  19. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    so you meen like have the bars go into eachother? draw one then start the next one in the bar? or am i misunderstanding what ur saying. oh shit uv been doing it for a while then...it shows lol. thanks for the advice man, i appreciate it
     
  20. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    ill draw it for you no probs